I love that last part where Sideswipe practically throws Earth law in Ratchet's face.

HAha Love this story!
But it made me cry :(

This was such a great story, it was so nicely writen! :D Fantastic Job!

aw that was so swet man i luv the twins this story rocked

this was very good. poor twins

Awesome story!

This story was perfect! The ending was genius.

*crying*

I'm...

So happy...

*hugs twins*

I love you guys...

Try listening to this and reading at the same time and tell me you weren't crying.

That was a good story i was neally crying. its really well ritten. i loved it.

Yay! _

Sunny's dream was beautiful. Very well done. And how ironic that just what everyone was telling Sides not to do was what saved Sunny...

*hugs twins*

YAYYS! Sunstraker didn't die! I just KNEW you wouldn't let the yellow piece of scrap metal die!

suntraker: HEY!

AW: . . . . o.0; he heard that? oh no. . . .

Sunstreaker: Get back here you insignificant lifeform!

AW: I didn't mean it! Gahh!

Sideswipe: (Giggling) no .. . . not the. . . LAPTOP! Oh Aw is so gonna kill sunny!

(Everyone hears very large nuclear explosion in the background)

AW:(Holding a bunch of wires behind her back) Hi Sunny, wanna get deactivated? Such a good story thank you PuraJazzBot!

Wow... Simply _wow_. What a superbly-written fic. The emotions and the imagery in here was wonderful; very thoughtfully written and very thought emotion-provoking. The characterization was great, as was the musical/lyrical selection: very fitting. Great job!

Finally got a chance to review this. Still love this. Gotta love those crazy twins. *heart*

Wow, that was beautiful. The symbolism is very nice, and the mood is well done too. Keep up the good work. n.n