I loved it! Congratulations on an amazing job! Maybe write a part 2 where Hinata finally takes that stand?

I love it alot and Neji's POV is well written

i love!

cool

really good

That was stupendous! it was so beautifully written, i admire you skill to portraythese two in a way that emphazizes and accentuates thier characters great job!

Wow...I knew Hinata wasn't weak before, but this fic just reafirmed my thoughts. I like the way you said her strength was like water, slowly eroding the Hyuuga rules and tradition. Wow, this fic has seriously impressed me .

~Saira

Beautifully done.

I don't really understand the last sentence, but that's probably just me. You did a fine job.

I'm glad you made Hinata a strong person, and not just a giggly blushing girl.

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sweet!

oO...good point! The ending was so kawii!

I think you are right with the part "But it’s not easy to hate someone who stammers, blushes, smiles shyly and would apologize for existing if she got it in her head it’d have a chance of making him feel better." I think it is imposible to hate someone like Hinata-chan.

This is a total 10/10 points fic. 'thumbs up'

Odd and strangely poetic. Simply marvelous... tho I kinda have a soft spot for Hinata, hehe... She's truly cool. :)

Great job!

Very nicely done.

Nice. Hinata and Neji captured in just a few hundred words.

~~*ShinakaStar*~~

Very good! The narration is very fluid. _ Good work!