Love it

Great!

I adore this little tid bit “And with their Grandfather still in office as the Minister of Magic... ” stating that Lucius took up the role as Grandfather to Adria even though she isn’t his granddaughter. That’s what I was confused about the previous times i have read this fic but now it’s clear.

So far, this is the best of your 3 stories, but I keep wanting to paraphrase Princess Bride's script and tell you that bloodlust does not mean what you think it means. An uncontrollable urge to kill someone is not the same as sexual passion in any normal person. Maybe you used the wrong word repeatedly, just to get comments. If so, you succeeded. I hope you can improve your English skills as you read and write more in the future. Or a good beta will be useful right now.

How rude/cruel to leave Harry alone, covered in blood, with no pain relief, no healing charms, etc. I don't blame Snape, I blame the author.

Cute story! I really enjoyed reading it! :)

-Yvonne

One of the BEST story I've ever read! Thank you for writing this story...I really love it!

This is such a beautiful fanfic. It is literally every thing I bloody want in an mpreg! Beautiful

I like Harry as a healer/doctor. I'm surprised that they agreed so quickly to let Lucius babysit fulltime. I'm so happy they had another child though I'd always imagined that Harry would have at least four since he wanted a big family. I'm actually not a big fan of 19 years later epilogues. I don't know why but they just leave me with a feeling of incompleteness. I really enjoyed this story. It's really an interesting concept to getting Harry and Severus together.

I don't know at the beginning of which chapter it was but in the author's notes you mentioned that you're not too keen on the name Callisto anymore. Though the meaning is beautiful, I agree but I found that it's easy to just refer to her as Callie which is a very cute name and fits an infant better. I like the story and I am so happy that Sev finally agreed to a relationship. I also like all of his actions from suddenly realizing that he wants Harry to stay and running off to reorganize to how protective/possessive he is of Callie at Hogwarts. Though it's fast, it's not unrealistically too fast. Thanks for writing.

Great story ... a shocking late mpreg ( my aunt had one when her daughter was 12!) ? brother with Draco or James as a middle name?

So far the only things I dislike are the bossiness from both Albus and Hermione. What reason was there for Dumbledore get mad at Severus for the article in the newspaper? I could understand wanting to clarify, but storming Severus' house in anger? Also, Hermione is just waaaaay too demanding and self-rightous, though thankfully she is accepting in this story.
I love everything else, even that explanation of the baby's name ;) Can't wait to see Lucius' reaction!

outstanding

That's terrible! no matter WHO the father is she should have her mother care for her!

Uh... I hope they both survive!