Great fic. Very silly and certainly on edge of complete crack, but well enough written to be very enjoyable.

Fun fact, the exodus never happened, as the Jews were never slaves of Egypt. There is archeological evidence (and lack of evidence too which is also very telling) that they were never even there (as in not even there temporarily as nomads!). Talk about ancient slander!

I think what always impresses me with your writing style is how intelligent and witty the banter is. It's like dueling...with words! Love it.

That aside, tarot, divination and the like are all totally awesome, and I loved that Ryou used cleromancy as a device to declare his obsessive love for his darker half.

Basically, your writing ability is godly :]

“Is this the part where I spell out the fact that I’m obsessed with you in a very disturbing fashion, considering that you’re my evil twin from somewhere very hot but too sandy to be hell?”

That has to be the best line ever. I love this story!

That was just beautifully demented. Yes, I -know- you wrote it a long time ago; not caring here. Was still beautifully demented and ended quite nicely. Bakura and Ryou wrote the very definition of batshit-crazy. _

fun...is there something where Ryou knows what the numbers mean?

I don' think that anybody lost. Creepy, then not so much. Unique, an', odd.

I loved the mix of dark and cute in this, the way they were kind of creepy at the start, but made the transition to being rather, well, fluffily cute (inasfar as someone like Bakura can ever be called that) so natural that I only realized I was squealing at the end because people were throwing me unkind looks. ; I also loved the tone of the beginning of the fic, about life being a game (and them being winning it). Thank you very much for writing me such a great fic!

An unique and intriguing fic. And amusing, I like it a lot. It was fun to read and I like their game of divination w/ dice. _ Keep up the great writing. Hope to read more of your fics in the near future. See ya. _~

XD Awesomeness! Me love! E! D

Dice divination sounds like FUN. *grins*

Very entertaining

How the HELL does Ryou know what the dice add up to? how can he memorise every single turnout and it's meaning? I want to know! Brilliant fic, especially when Kura and Ryou got together!

Love Animechik.

How the HELL does Ryou know what the dice add up to? how can he memorise every single turnout and it's meaning? I want to know! Brilliant fic, especially when Kura and Ryou got together!

Love Animechik.

hehe very cute... I like the whole OC Ryou speaking bluntly... that was hott! Nice one-shot, one of the best in my op. GJ!

The *Queen Of Games*

For some reason all I can think about now is Monopoly.

*whacks head* What does that have to do with the story? How am I supposed to develop a well-rounded critique?

Livi

If the previous fic was 'creepy', this is cute. Very good game, indeed... *g* Nice writing.