very good story i loved it. yur a talented writer.

I love how you captured Emma's feelings in this. Most people go from, "Emma watched Rick die blah blah blah she got upset" to "OH EM GE MY LIFE IS SO EFFING HORRIBLE HOW CAN I GO ON?" I liked the medium.

wow, that was so good, i really loved it. added to favs. you wrote that so well. it's not like the rest of the tts stories. it was really good.

holy crap.

more,this is sso good,i'm already in lloove!

plz write more very soon!

-chelsea

Beautiful. You really did capture Emma. I was sick of trying to find a decent Time Stands Still story that wasn't like OmgZ Rick almost shot me~! Added to favorites, of course.

Wonderful job, I loved it.

Brilliant. I'm out of words capable of describing this fic.

Sexy. Real. Beautiful. Heart-breaking. Well-done.

beautiful and well written...undilutedly descriptive I felt as thought I were there in the halls of DCS when the shots rang out

Way to completely hit the nail on the head, damn it. I sensed a rather strong Emma/Toby vibe in this probably because I'm a crazy loon like that but it really fit. You need to do a Craig one shot with how he found Jimmy. I mean, it's fucking required. So, rock on. *favorites*

Wow. That is a very interesting and believable twist on what Time Stands Still didn't (and should have) shown us. It was amazing! Very beautiful and well-written. Fantastic job!

Efforts not wasted. I thought they should've showed something like this, too in that episode. So this was really good. :)

Excellent work... judging from that last sentence, are you suggesting that Emma may be the one contemplating suicide this season? Please write more...