Very funny, liked alot, so did my friends! Keep typing.

AWESOME!, PLEASE, PLEASE CONTINUE!

Update!

Woo! Usopp/Kaya!

Sanji/OC, very cute.

Luffy/Nami... cute, but I would've preferred Zoro/Nami. But it's not my fic, and you're doing a great job, keep going!

This is pretty good so far and i cant wait to see more. However, Sanji is quite out of character during his conversation with Nami. He would never, EVER be rude to his beautiful Nami-san (even if her was in love with someone else...its just Sanji...)

Otherwise, this story is pretty good! Keep it up!

Oh and by the way, is Zoro going to hook up with anyone? *wink wink*

:D Luffy and Nami, huh? cute. and, erm, lets see wat else there was to say... I don't know anything about Sanji, except he really likes women, so I don't really have anything to say about him. Yohchi's stuttering is getting annoying. .

"Why does he always call Usopp crap-liar?"

Okay, I give up, why does he? Considering Sanji doesn't in the series anywhere that I recall..."long-nose", on occasion, but usually it's simply "Usopp." Of course, Sanji would never dream of thinking of suggesting he might even accidentally hurt a woman, much less tell his beloved Nami-san, "Unless you say my name. Then I might hurt you." I suppose if true love is enough to make him turn his back on chivalry, it's unlikely he'd remember Usopp is a friend.

your story was very good, i really liked how it started. i also like the Usopp/Kaya pairing idea a lot *scratchs head* hm...Are you gonna pair Nami and Zoro? I like that one, too! (Zoro is my favortie, after Shanks of course)Keep up with your story and update soon! I can't wait!

Anna-chan

Hey, I don't think you'd really attack Ren. after al... Cute story so far. I think that Yochi is just a tad extreme in her shyness... but toned down a notch, it's good.

:D