Reviews for Cookie Dough 4: The Longest Day of their Lives
David Fishwick chapter 24 . 2/24/2016
Brilliant idea and thanks for writing as I enjoyed reading this story.
Imzadi chapter 24 . 8/8/2005
First of all, I am glad Harmony got away; I can't help but like her. Secondly, I'm glad Cordelia managed to say goodbye; Xander is one hell of a guy. Third, I'm glad Kate's okay, at least physically. Fourth, I'm really angry that, after all Lindsey's done to help, they put him in a holding cell and are wondering what to do with him. How unfair is that! I hope it turns out that he's actually working for the government along with (his wife?) Kate Lockley and they'll get him out. I'm sure there'll be an epilogue to finish things off. But please remember the good Lindsey did. Please let him be okay with some hope for the future.
Tariq chapter 24 . 8/7/2005
Hi. Excellent Ending to this chapter. I liked Xander's approach. Kinda Like what Wes did to his cyborg dad. CooL!
Imzadi chapter 23 . 8/3/2005
"Don't be a bigger idiot than you are!" "I think we both know that's not possible." What a twit Harmony is. "It's part of the whole brooding, can't-see-anyone-reforming-but-him, self-righteous thing he's got going on." How true! Way to go, Spike. He's our quotable guy of this chapter. "Cordelia was never more than a nuisance." Good one from Faith! "Normally I'd call for a sling with five small stones." Dawn knows her Bible.

Hunting us down in the best Sam Gerard fashion." You gotta love Tommy Lee Jones! Even though she's evil, I can't help but hope that Harmony can make it through; Patrice the evil slayer is another matter. I would have liked to have heard Lindsey's answer to Angel about why he came there. I hope we'll find out next chapter.
Tariq chapter 23 . 7/30/2005
Hi. Excellent chapter!
charli92 chapter 23 . 7/30/2005
awesome! i can't wait to read more, huge cliffhanger. update soon
Tariq chapter 22 . 7/17/2005
Hi. Excellent chapter! Plz Continue!
Darklight chapter 22 . 7/15/2005
Great going get cordy to kick Willows butt.

Keep teh chapters coming and lets see what Harm got else up her sleeves.
charli92 chapter 22 . 7/15/2005
awesome job! i'm so hooked on this story, can't wait to read more...
Imzadi chapter 22 . 7/14/2005
So Adam is back-new & improved & calling himself Cain! I must admit Kane is a super name for a super being! Harmony is starting to fall apart, I think. I believe the tide is beginning to turn in favor of our heroes. Don't let Robin die, please, or at least let Faith spend a last few moments with him. I also hope that Lindsey comes through all right; Kate, too. I'm eagerly awaiting the last two hours.
Darklight chapter 21 . 7/8/2005
Adam, he he he, Harmony has really grown up and using her brain getting all them together and do her biding.

More and get Harm to beat Buffy and the rest, can't wait to see how Spike fits in.
charli92 chapter 21 . 7/7/2005
once again another excillent chapter! hope you update soon.
Tariq chapter 21 . 7/7/2005
OOh...nice one. I can see Adam wreaking Havoc. I kinda agree with Lindsey. The plan sounds weak. Can we have Gunn in action? He's one of the strongest, & if Xander can get in on the action then why not Gunn?
Imzadi chapter 21 . 7/6/2005
I must say I like Lindsey's spirit, and he just may have something there. I think there is some of Cordelia inside of Jasmine. I still can't believe how smart Harmony is! She's got a head on her shoulders. So how is Kate? I hope she makes it through all right. All the players are coming together. Good chapter!
blink49 chapter 20 . 7/5/2005
This is a great story. Can't wait for the next update!
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