so cute *_* great fic!

Intense and emotional. I like it that Heph found someone, and that he was not pinning away awaiting Alexander's pleasure.

It gave me joy that Alexander was the jealous and insecure one, the partner trying to make up. Well done.

It would be wonderful if you wrote another chapter.

Seasons greetings.

Well written. At the end Alexander and Hephaestion seem to make up so to speak. I think that you should add another chapter, where they make up in a more physically inimate way. It would tie up some of the sexual tension in the story.

I liked it. It's nice, cute, and poetic. Keep writing!

If you're 13, you write quite well. I, too, think that no one meant as much to Alexander as Hephaestion did.

Beautiful.. very, very beautiful.

Wow. This is really great, especially your age and for this being your first fanfiction. There are a few spelling errors, but not much else I could critique.

However, I think you should correct your summary. Proper spelling and grammar may help draw more people to your story, which I think deserves a better first impression than your summary gives.

omg that was so good. lol i saw alexander last week and i had friends giggling on my shoulder lol thru all the gay parts of the movie. which were alot. lol. but i loved this. ur a pretty good writer mate! i dunno if u should do another chpt but if u do i'll read it.

::Alex::

i though hephaistion would hook up with a pretty lil boy hehe but otherwise this is awesome.

totally made my day (actually my mornin)

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ah isn't letting me sign in! :P oh wells.

juss to reply to some of your wonderful comment -thanks so much!

I am thirteen..yupp yupp fourteen next year on april 14th! :)

I HATE BAGOAS! (for all you bagoas lovers out there, I am sorry.)

and yes he looks like a sissy elf. :P hehe later

I'm glad you wrote this because thanks to you, hephaistion gets even with Alexander. Its just not fair you know? Hehe... Great fic!

Are you sure you're 13? damn your good!(by the way I'm only 16 p) is it R18 there wherever you're from? (I'm guessing your from the USA) coz here in the philippines its R13. anyway I loved the fic! I hope you make more. Oh and by the way, i totally hate that eunuch guy. And I could've sworn I saw him in LOTR. He looks like an elf.

I like to see hephaistion has another deserve this.()..will you write next chapter? please!

ooh yeah, Bagoas the evil sissy! in the movie Alexander was such a dumbhead to let him go.. it's ok that he got married but at least not HIM.

it's nice. i like your story! _

wow. wow wow wow wow wow. lotsa emotion (which was good) and i liked how hephaistion shared the achilles/patroklus story wit that grl..hehe serves alexander right cos he was ignoring hephaistion.

and i like the name sephoras.

oh. and i must know what happens after this. they go back to camp, ssplash in river, what?