This was your best chapter so far.

Not corny, it is cute! Free actually hand wrapping gifts is something I'd love to see!

I loved it! So cute!

Great story!

I really liked this story the only thing I didn't like was how it seemed as though Hermione didn't know how to have fun. I think she did but it was hard for her to really enjoy hogwarts and her friends because she was muggle born and plus constantly being in trouble with Ron and Harry but I did love this story either way :)

So Cute! good stoyr! good Job!

This was cute. Especially her disaster date with Dean lol. And I agree with your decision not to make a sequel. While I would have loved one, this story didn't seem like it required one. Some stories feel so incomplete that you hope the author will continue but this seemed whole. Not many stories can boast that so great job wrapping it up. :)

oh my God. I LOVE paintball. And it's such a Fred thing to do, too! He'd love paintball, haha

I know I've read this before, but I couldn't remember if I'd reviewed or not...either way, I love this story. It's so sweet, and super adorable. Great work :)

Love this story. I've read it a couple times now lol just because its so good.

Awe! Very cute:) Loved it! Nice work:)

-Lynn

Interesting start! It is fun to wrap gifts, it's actually something I really enjoy doing.

This story was really super cute :)

I love this story!

this story was awesome! i was laughing in almost every chapter!