Horribly written

It was a really nice story! Hahaha funny! Possessive Gohan? Nice!

Unbreakable chains bulma made? Hehehe kinki!

Excelent.

Loved it! Honestly I came for the lemons (pun not intended lol) but I found the story so engaging I didnt even bother going and fing those! IMO you should have labeled the story under romance/humor cuz the last couple chapter were fucking funny!

Awesome, this is a great fan fiction, who else thinks so?

Gohans a monkey, not a friggin cat. If he loses himself to his Saiyan blood, he should be acting like a horny Tarzan, not like a cat in heat. Why is he purring? It adds nothing to the fic, in fact, I'd say it takes away from th fic considering there's no reasoning behind it.

Sedative Candy? I believe I know some parents that may need some of that lol

i cannot find this story on the site...

"Hmm… jummIIIIAAHAII?" EXACTLY what i would've imagined. i fell out of my chair laughing, and we have hardwood floors...ouch.

Oh my goodness, I love this fic! Ive actualy reviewed it a few times under my old account, but I always return when I'm in the mood for some more adult oriented G/V. I wish you would consider writing another fic, with the same sexual energy of course. This is also one of the fics I use as a sort of inspiration or guide to writing my own more adult themed scenes.

If you ever publish another G/V again, I will gladly read! :D

WHY end it so soon it was getting good XO

ya ya this fic is great it was faking funny when gohan almost killed sharpner

HAHAHA oh god I couldn't stop laughing throughout that thing, wow. Nice job.

LMAO hahahah wow hm...melons...HUNGRY! I love it lol that was the best! Such a cute fic great work.