Awesome story.

This is a great story. I loved the premise, the execution, the writing style, everything. Great job, all around!

AZ

This is complete? Well, it is a good start to a story. Hope there is more to come.

I loved this story. It had action, Quidditch and romance. I know it's been a long, long time since this story was posted but I have to agree that I'd love to read a sequel someday.

beautiful story and great ending..loved the bith with hermione being levitated on to harrys broom _

This has been a great story with a heart-warming overtone. I do think that you softened Snape up a bit much, but it was a workable change.

Just finished the whole story a sequel is definelty required

Great little story.

Great story. I had a lot of fun reading it (much to the detriment of my studies.) I like the way you structured the story around the Quidditch match, but didn't let it drag the story down or take over.

Amazing work on this. Well done.

Great story. again it has the potential to be continued. If you ever i do i look forward to reading it.

Cel

Great story Thank for taking the time to write it

i loved it but why end it there please continue this story or alow someonne else to i would perfer if you do it if you have someone else do it please put a link on your profile or send one to me this is my favorite story yet

i really loved this story and wish that you had wrote a sequel to it because i would dearly love to know how everything ended but this one ended on a very good note, but hopefully you will do a sequel soon, thanks for sharing this with everyone and i hope to read some of your other stuff :)

I have read many, many Harry/Hermione stories. This one really stands out. It was very well written. I don't really know what to say. Your Snape was fantastic. You did good work with Dumbledore and McGonagal but I think in some ways they would be easier to write than Snape. You did a terrific job with his character especially, in my view. He did a very compassionate thing for Neville's parents, he was understanding with Neville, refraining from overbearing intimidation toward him. He even complimented him, yet I don't have to have some sort of seizure involving intolerably high blood sugar. Snape was still his disagreeable self and I could respect that. His demeanor looked good on him and quite in character.

The Quidditch match for charity was an excellent and unique idea. Having the match at the school let you bring characters from the earlier HP books back to us in a believable and comfortable way. I always liked Oliver and also Viktor so it was a pleasure to see them... without rolling my eyes and saying "as IF", because of some trumped up circumstance.

I like the way you dealt with the Ron/Hermione issue. Sure, Hermione would have been hurting, no doubt Ron was too, but at least there didn't have to be any lasting hard feelings or predictable break up of the Trio.

It was good to see your own characters as well. Not new super wizards and wonder witches to hijack the story out from under our favorite characters (I can't stand that) but appropriate people doing sensible things at reasonable times. I rather liked Amanda.

Thank you for the great story. Very well done.