This was uploaded about a decade ago.
I watched evangelion in 2017. I discovered this yesterday.
Why? Why do you made this awful nostalgic piece of art? This ages like wine; when i read old fanfiction all i can think is "why the fuck those old fanfics are written like if the author is an autist"
Makes me think about an era i never lived. I'm just a teen, obviously i never lived the fanficion 2000 era.
And this is a nice memory that i never got.
Sorry if this sounds edgy.
Its nice that you still active. This is such a piece of art.
You made me feel like is 2005 but well written. I was hopping a MS happy ending; and i'm thankful that this hasn't it. Everyone and them feelings in this fic are awful. Like real people.
Good joob dude
Tf this thing is a bible sorry if sounds really edgy

God fucking dammit I went into this wanting a lemon ShinjixMisato fic and now im fucking cry.

Ah, gotta love the classic "for all intensive purposes" typo

I hope this Shinji will grow some spine...

Okay, seriously. Why the frig is every guy other than Shinji in this story some perverted sexist a**hole? Like wtf, every time you describe other boys in this story, you blatantly depict them as piggish and straight narcissistic. Kaji? He genuinely loved Misato in Evangelion, not simply seeing her as some conquest. Ken, Touji, and every teen boy in Shinji's class? When the f**k did they ever act even remotely like they do here; blatantly viewing women as sexual objects and nothing more? Touji would have NEVER treated Hikari like he did in this. When it comes to Asuka, at least her abuses kinda makes sense considering her highly aggressive and dominating personality.

There is not a SINGLE decent male character in this story besides Shinji, and not only is it WHOLLY unrealistic, it's frankly disturbing. It's almost like you're one of those 3rd wave feminists who hate men, and you are projecting that mindset into your writing. I really hope that isn't the case.

probably my favorite story of all time(well, regarding Evangelion fanfics) it's not the best, in my opinion, buts it just has such a personality. It's definitely not for everyone, due to the graphic sex and pedophilic content that is fills this fix to the brim. But if you enjoy much darker stories, then this is a great story.

Great story. Sad yes but much closer to how the show could have gone what with all the mental disability in each of the characters. Nice work.

You were right it is dark. But I'm still here. After reading your 3 lighter stories, this is certainly a twist but not unenjoyable.

Now that was a fucked up tale. Great work.

i really fucking hope asuka dies a painful death

As Ritsoko is talking to Misato after the first encounter, I just imagine nothing but white noise in Misato's head as she realizes what happened the night before. XD

Are you Hideaki Anno i disguise... cos this is a completely different degree of fucked up

dammm

What is up with the way you structure your sentences?

Funny story: one review ruined this for me around chapter 18... the stupid idiot not only...

-THERE ARE SPOILERS IN THIS REVIEW-

...mentioned Misato dies but also how rushed the ending felt.

And wow... talk about a REALLY rushed ending... Would have been a lot better to see each event unfolding, instead of this cliff note version that was the last chapter. And also lots of grammar and spelling errors. lastly, Hyuga's name is Makoto, not 'motoko'.

Other than that I have no complaints. Not even with the death of Misato, though I am a sucker for Shinji x Misato and would have preferred an ending with them together. Very good story.

I'm gonna go check out your other work now, since you have more eva stories if i'm not mistaken. See you then.