Awesome story! It literally pained me to read pretty much the seven and a half chapters, but the last half made up for it in full! Hahaha

LL not acknowledging each other? Ughh tore my heart out lol. Very great writing, because only great writing can actually have my emotions play a part when I'm reading. There were more than a couple times my heart sank to my stomach, or I got a sick feeling of saddness or depression lol so kudos to you! Awesome job!

LOVE!

Truly awful story. I had to waste lots of reading time before I found out Lorelai had really been a whore. At least if you'd shown us that in the first chapter I could have stopped reading. In your version of GG I want Rachel to get Luke. She deserves him more than your shitty verion of Lorelai. Do you really think we want to read JJ stories where Lorelai is under a chris spell where she goes off with chris when she's with the lover of her life luke? Idiot!

Oh my god! What kind of an idiot are you? Do you actully think we even like Lorelai after that. She's a slut and does not deserve Luke in this story. You're pissing all over her character here and completely humiliating Luke. Piss off.

Now we're hearing a bit about why they split up I don't think Lorelai deserves Luke. She pretty much spat in his face with all the chris shite. Kind of a sick fucked up shitting on Luke thing you've had happen here.

This is the best java junkie story I've EVER read on . It was amazing, I loved it so so so SO much.(May seem a bit too much, but it's the truth.) Definitely deserves 10/10.

What a lovely story thanks for sharing~

OMG I LOVE IT! best story ever! lol

They were talking about this on Fanforum and I had to come read it! OMG, am I glad I did. I was so upset during most of the story, but I kept reading that I would not be disappointed. I am so glad I finfished it. I can't say enough how well this was written, and it kept me from putting it down. I read it all in one day, and couldn't wait to finish it. I am going to read the other two stories you guys wrote! I hope you write more, this one was aweome! This is by far the longest review I have ever given! Thanks again, you guys are talented!

Well, damn. You are just an awesome writer, aren't you? You know, I was just looking over someone else's favorites and saw your story, clicked on it b/c I was looking for something good to read, and next thing i know, I'm reading one of the best stories I've ever read in fanfiction. That was a cpl days ago and that was 'Who Lies Beneath'. I've had one major favorite for a long time now, and you just came along and changed everything. Now my world is just all outta whack. I'll get over it though, because that story had to move over and make room. I already reviewed that story, but let me just re-state here how much I loved it. I can't stress that enough.

This story just proves that your talent didn't pop up like a 'one time only' thing. You do an awesome job with these characters. At first I was thinking that you had Luke upset b/c of the actual events that went down on the show, and i was like, 'ok, it's not even that serious', but then all that other stuff was revealed and it just fell right into place. And, um, now that I'm thinking about it, I don't even think the whole wedding thing had even happened when you wrote this story, so I now feel stupid for thinking that. Never mind.

The 'i love you' was done perfectly too. It was so very Lorelai. It was unique and special, and very very believable. The whole thing was.

I know this story is ancient by now, but I still had to review, and I hope you get it and read it and smile and do a cart wheel 'cause you're so proud of yourself. You deserve it, so do two cart-wheels.

There's lots more that I'd love to say, but I may appear a bit stalkerish, so I'll wrap it up. It's just so rare to find stories that are this good, and they make me even more talkative than I normally am, but I have to give the author his/her props, so this is me...giving you your props. Okay, I'll stop now :-) Peace.

OMG this is the best story ever! Seriously it was amazing from start to finish! Loved it!

oh..my..god! i just read the full 8 chapters yesterday and finished it up today and it was unbelievably amazing! thank you so much for such a great fan fic and i loved the plot and everything. and thanks so much for a happy ending because we all know that Luke and Lorelai will always be together in the end! Java Junkies for life! :) great job again and i cant wait 2 read your other WLB fics.

That's amazing! It's on my fav stories list now! Gah...it's like...im in love with it. It's good. Insanely long, not that that's bad. And this chapter almost had me crying listening to Meatloaf's Couldn't Have Said It Better...aw

so many emotions while reading that! I loved the video! WOW. Great great ending!

tomorrow this will be a yr old but i had a half day and read the whole thing and omg i loved it. just thought u should know.