soo good :)

thanks for a great story 3

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aj killed himself .. right ?

if aj didnt kill himself , i may follow in dawns footsteps !

ohmygosh , my heart LITERALLY stopped .

i thought it was kirsten ! though , i think that may have been your point ?

or im just too stupid to catch on ;P

but regardless ; AMAZINGLY written .

moving on to the next chapter ! :)

holy crap you had me fooled lol

i thought i was kirsten trying to kill herself..phew!

if that's what you were going for you did a good job lol

great first chapter.

can't wait to read the rest!

AHH. RYAN SAID I LOVE YOU TO HER! SO SWEET. :D

YAY! Ryan moved into the main house!

Um, cliffie? Oh god. AJ.

Please tell me he killed himself, not Kirsten...

Oh, that jail scene reminded me so much of the one on the show... Dave kind of freaks me out, I don't know why, but he seems subtly dangerous (if that makes any sense?).

Anyway: Love your Ryan-opening-up-to-Kirsten moments. I always look forward to those in your fics! :)

Like everyone, I thought it was Kirsten killing herself.

The beginning had no name for the character, only a "She". The scenario fit Kirsten so well to trick us: drinking, husband, screwed up life caused by alcohol, 3 family members...

OMG that story was AMAZING! I read it all in one sitting. I couldnt stop. You write so well and you really invovle the reader and you capture each character's personailities perfectaly!

Amazing work :P

omg that was awesome! i so thought it was Kirsten killing herself! awesomely awesome writing!

This is sucha great story! It is so well written and the end was perfect! Thanks so much for writing it!

Okay, I'm almost certain that I'm very late in reviewing this and for that I am SO SORRY. I LOVE this so much and it's so ridiculously awesome...I wish that your stories would actually happen on the show because they're fantastic. ;) I loved Kirsten's reaction...and the Kirsten/Ryan bonding that was happening, and Sandy being so goddamn adorable, and everyone going out to dinner together. You're so great at endings and you kept that up with this story. You bring such fantastic closure to everything you write and at the same time leave your readers wanting more. It's exquisite and I'm sorry I haven't reviewed sooner. You're AWESOME! ;)

xoxo

This was GREAT! I loved it

Thanks so much!

That was a good ending for a story! Thank you so much for a truly awesome story. Do write more stories like this.

awe... its just, lol awe, its all i can say. Awe. :o)

What a perfect ending to a great story!

I loved it and I love the new one you're cooking up, so Im off to read it and review!