Very cool story! I especially like how you worked the crossover. :D

More, I tell you! More!

eh?

...Kurenai is useing Jyuken? It's entirely possible i suppose, but Jyuken is a pretty exclusivly Hyuuga attack.

Good fight. Not a bad story all in all.

Gen-chi: Physical energy

Ten-chi: Spirit energy

Hon-chi: Mental energy

Chakra: a melding of excess spiritual and physical Chi (Shinobi, sages, oriental)

Magic: a melding of excess spiritual and mental Chi (Willow, Harry Potter, Mages, Necromancers, Elemists, Mystics)

Empathy: a melding of excess physical and mental Chi (Empathic abilities, telekenesis, telepathy, Charles Xavier, Jean Grey, Ect.)

Thought you might be interested.

Teaching zander rasengan before they even do water walking? And the way you described it, the technique might be even harder. That is if i'm right in assuming your 'peircing needel' is for all intents and purposes an elongated rasengan. That adds very difficult shape manipoulation to it. if he learned this in less than a year i'll be shocked.

Ice Jutsu; Hyoton no jutsu are all bloodline techniques. How is Oz doing them? anyways POI Ice barrier would be Hyoton no tate or Hyoton: tate no jutsu.

...You gave him sharingan? How could you? That's so despicably cliche i'd never have expected if from the master of chaos literature. who added that? Please say it was one of the others.

...Despite my loathing of the uchiha and their cheat engine (sharingan) this opens up an interesting question. Does xander, with his new bloodline, have the second stage? Myangoku is unlocked to uchiha, whether they have unlocked the first stage or not, when their best friend dies and it is their fault (typically by their own hand but Kakashi has proven the other method). Buffy has died twice and at least the first one was in small part xanders fault. He certianly felt so anyways. both times.

Huh, so that's who the immortal is... nteresting reltioship you've cooked up.

Great story, can't wait for more of it.

Love the story, update soon!

cool

col

Where's the rest?

Thanks for writing,

Kin.

that was good love the buffy/naruto crossover I HOPE You WILL UPDATE Soon because Im planing To kill you!

excellent, pity there is not more

Wicked Start!

Please Keep Updating!