Another nice introspective. You really have the knack of setting a mood and running with it. Very nice writing.

Wow - gotta think 'bout this one. You are a wonderful writer.

that was chilling. awesome and so... true. i love how you capture the dark elements of Dark Angel and still manage to insert the light elements. loved it.

WOW! Definatly my fav of all your pieces! You have an amazing way with words, taking them and turning them into beautiful phrases and captivating images.

My fav line has to be "Her life is sepia and these moments are gold". What an amazing line. So perfect for this story.

Cate

Oh, damn, just rip my heart out...

As so often in your work, this is so dark and powerful and tragic...so troubled and troubling! I have to

admit it's easier to read these short, hits-and-runs because more is so overwhelming... and aren't we all

addicted and craving more!

Bravo. Don't give up DA, even if you wander off for a change of pace...

Thank you beautifully done

Bwah! Bawling. So sad! Good but soul shattering.

Beautifully written - but so dark! Kind of disturbing, lol!