One of my favorite stories of SG-1 fanfiction and especially of mini-Jack, and I look forward to seeing where this one can go from here.

Just discovered this story. WELL DONE! Love the ending ️

Read through in one sitting. Great job.

Good job. Good story.

That was FANTASTIC! Thank you!

Cool story, I like that it is very original.

Nice i like this and i hope to find more stories with Jack O'Neill clone in them so if you have some send the id codes or names to me please

Awesome story!

Do you have more like this?

I knew this was the last chapter going in, and based on the rest I had pretty high expectations, but really had no idea what direction it might go. It was a perfect Jack ending.

Wow.

While the entire chapter is fantastic, Jack's conversation with Sarah is spectacular.

I was originally hoping for an entertaining little mini-Jack story; this has turned out to be so much more. The plot and emotional layers are great.

The bathroom scene was priceless. I almost fell out of my chair laughing.

You can really cover a lot of emotional territory in a fairly short space and do it well.

I really liked the way you started and end the chapter with conversations between O'Neill and Carter (even though poor Teal'c didn't make it to the second one).

Jake's lifestyle and planning are believable for what we know of the character. Kudos.