That was your gonna update soon

Xtine you are the best writer i know. Unfortunately you are going to take my favorite book and my favorite song and turn them into little boy smut. ;-) Hehe! Its okay though i still love you. Oh yeah. You said that jenny was yours. I'll fight you for her. Actually you would kick my ass, so nevermind. You are truly kick ass though.

Too many cliffies. Update soon please, I like where this is going.

it's too sad but it's true o how i love your story i whish you would review soon. i like reading stories when it shows Harry's true feelings. I hope Draco doesn't screw it up...good job Pirate X

Yay! Do another chapter! *Shakes fist* Do it...

I promised that I would review, so here's my review. As always, your style is impeccable. One minor word choice problem... Snape eyes him coldly for a few minutes. Personally, I would say "moments", not "minutes".

I am most definitely interested to see where this is going. *does the kitty-in-the-face thing* More please?

o, i like this, very mysterious, its cool, good job,

Yay update

This does seem to be Ron/Harry (or at least one sided Ron/Harry). So why is it under Harry and Draco? Why would Harry be jealous of Ron kissing Hermoine? It does sound like a lover's quarrel. I doubt I will revisit this. Nothing against your story. It's just I am strictly Harry/Draco and don't really like them with others. Good luck with it!

I know, I don't know what's gotten into you! Three chapters, well two and a prologue and no slash yet! Tsk! And I'll tell you another strange thing, I actually understood the french you used! I can't really believe that, I must have actually be listening in class, AND taking it in aswell!

All that's kinda off the subject of the actually chapter though so I'll start telling you what I thought about that instead.

I'm glad we actually found out what's wrong with Harry, and in some cases I don't blame him for being angry but calling 'Mione a slut was way off the mark.

I like the argument, it was really in character for an angry-Harry, I could imagine them both saying this.

I need to find out what is gonna happen, but I agree with Jen, don't make it too sad, but do make it interesting, like you will anyway *wink*

You have to post more of this soon, I'm really getting into it, and my hotmail's working again so I can check me author alerts and that more often without having to go the long way round.

Be back soon,

Loadsa luv,

Suny

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im totally with ya. KEEP GOING!

Post more! I love it and want to find out what happens next. Hopefully it's not *too* sad, but knowing you... There, here's your review. I love you!

Aye, that shonen-ai better be coming and all! Don't know what I'd do without it!

I'm liking this and I'm loving the fact that you've wrote a Harry Potter, I'm dead proud of ya hun! I don't know how many you've read yet but I'm glad you're enjoying them enough to write a one yourself.

I loved the prologue, it was very intense and captivating. The atomosphere alone it created was amazing, and that's not even mentioning the content! It seems as though this is going to be a tremendous story.

Chapter 1 was intruging and is definatly worth continuing. I personally happen to like Ron, well in alot of stories I do, it really depends on how the author portrays the character, if you deside to make him a bastard, I'll go along with that, it you decide to have them make it up, I'll read that too. Considering it is your story and not mine, it's obviously your choice. It's easy to see the characters however you choose to write them. Ron is an easy one, I've read stories where he's lovly and stories where he's a bastard, like Draco Veritas which I'm reading now where he's a proper prick! Anyways, do which ever. I would lie to know what he's done wrong though, which I'm sure we'll find out soon enough.

I can't wait until you post more, I'll read it as soon as I can. I'm really sorry it's taken me this long to read this, I haven't been able to get on me email (still) and because I couldn't, I haven't been going on the computer as much, but sorry, I'm sure you don't want my life story, email my yahoo when you get the next chapter and I'll be sure to take a look.

Just one question, are you planning to write Blaise into this story? I love Blaise most of the time, when Blaise is written as a male and a friend, I think he can make one of the best characters in the story.

Well I've got to love ya 'n' leave ya now! Good luck with your writing chic, not that you need it, it's always fab! Be back soon, so you'd better get more posted!

Loadsa luvs and hugs,

Sunny

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