I stopped reading after "Severace Snape". 15 years... to write 17 bad chapters. They are bad if all the text is like that (and I read the reviews too).
So, I'll not read more of that fic.

Get a beta.

Hi, sorry to tell you but I'm so disappointed with this story! It's boring, sketchy and has gramma mistakes. The characters are flat and repetitive. There's many things like 'she has lots of money, perfectly beautiful, constantly giggling' which is definitely overkill. I tried to give you a chance and tried to read to see how it will develop. I couldn't make past 5th chapter, sorry. I don't believe you're a bad writer but think you're not interested in this story and not motivated enough. Write about something you really want to. Good luck.

Ah. Bummer, it was an authernote. Nice to know you do intend on redoing this and finishing it tho.
As to your stories being stolen that sucks big time. The example you shared tho as being "stolen"...honestly sounds as if you were being kinda petty. I mean restating what you explained: you got upset at a person liking your work enough to not only reshare it with appropriate credit so more people are aware of your work but that they also wrote a continuation fanfic of your fanfic for how they think the story would have went since you hadn't completed it.
That's like if Rowling got upset at all the fanfic writers of her Harry Potter series over the years for rewriting her ideas and thoughts to continue or alter her story and share it with others even though they don't claim ownership over her work yet she demands that ALL the stories get removed even if the fanfics are vastly differently from the HP series from the very beginning. Or like an artist getting mad at another artist for being inspired by them and copying their style to learn how to "art better" but never taking undue credit and even informing others who the inspiration is...which is all just...free advertising really. Personal Example: I never watched Labyrinth featuring David Bowie. I knew of it vaguely but wasn't interested. Came across a fanfic crossover that seemed very interesting but didn't understand about half of it since it followed what happened in the movie without actually retelling the entire movie. Got me interested in watching/knowing more about the movie and now I enjoy crossovers with it more and know what's going on better. Another personal example: A person reposted another's fic with full credit and continued it and made it clear when their deviation from the other's work started, I read it, enjoyed it, looked up the person who this writer was inspired by and read theirs out of curiosity for any differences and then read the other stories they had that looked interesting and ended up faving a few. That person reposting the story and continuing it had helped me find that writer sooner, assuming that I would have found them at all without the reshare. I have also learned that people having a copy of the "originator's fanfic story" is helpful overall cuz you never know when that story could be removed, deleted either accidentally or on purpose, or the site it was on is no longer in service. And the person who wrote it no longer has a copy so its left to the readers who do, bcuz they liked it so much, to reshare it and sometimes even give a copy to said writer to help them out.
Anywho, best of luck on your rewrites!

Well then...sounds like a problem.

Ohh la la! Convoluted paradoxes that really aren't, here we come! I wish you luck in keeping your continuity straight. This seems like it'll be fun AND you last updated...this year? Sweeeeeeeeettt. There's a good chance this will get finished then!

So...Harry doesn't want to change anything even tho he's changing a LOT just by being there let alone (possibly soon) reuniting Lily with her "real" family and dropped all those hints about his godfather. That's a doozy for anyone to just forget so he's likely created another timeline. A timeline where Snape is going to have a long term girlfriend, and retain communications with Lily at the least, and where (apparently) Lily is also a Slytherin for some reason. So unless you planned a very convulated story of this female Harry dying at some in the future before or once his male self is born or something and a bunch of others dying that no one ever speaks of in the future, female Harry is in a alternate dimension where she could do just about anything! Unless you intend for Harry's quick guesses to be absolutely wrong and his time traveling gender change is not permanent. Cuz, and this is a hunch, Harry despite being friends with his teacher Sev didn't seem to think or know that the older man was in a relationship before this event happened since he's hoping to date him now when that could/would also "change the future". And I disagree that being female makes him "more emotional" if anything he's just more aware and accepting/expressive of his emotions in this technically new magicked body he's yet to get fully used to.

Very interesting concept for a story, but the flow of the story feels kind of disjointed and stilted. Having a bit of a hard time getting through the story.

I'm really upset for you cause this story was really good. and stealing someone's else work is just down right despicable! those who did should be ashamed of their selves! I support you in this.

Well, I am glad to hear you say you plan to continue writing this story, even if its a redux version of it. I can't wait to read it. I am so sorry to hear your stories were stolen by another. I completely agree with you that that is a violation.

great chapter update soon

Good story! Now just update it!

You're a monster! How dare you get my emotions all messed up using quotes :'(

Needs serious work but I like the premise

OMC I love this so much! It is well written and I love the changes to the timeline. I love how it shows what is happening in the future without becoming very confusing as it jumps from future to past

Good chapter. I love the story.