This is really good but I don't think roll could actually beat zero AND criticise him. I like the human touch to her also I like her bold and defined character Aside from that one criticism, one of the best fics I've read welldone :) Oh and UPDATE

This was good

Great story but Roll seems a little to powerful for someone whos been asleep for so long

I truly enjoy this story, and your take on Roll! I see the difference between the original one and her creation, and I find it to add an interesting twist. I enjoy the difference that the 'new' Roll presents, and how she is sassy and human-like. Never before have I read a piece of literature such as this, and to be honest, I've become hooked on it! Please, do continue it! I'm looking forward to each and every chapter in the future, if you do write them.

cool, update soon, love the history

Christ, what with that shitty fight and Roll's near human bodily functions, this has become an obvious OC jerk-off fest. Fuck you, Zero is awesome. Roll is great too, better than Rock, but she is not so blatantly strong or cool. The 'near human design' of Roll MKII wouldn't be so horrible if you didn't underscore it as being LOLSUPERIOR to your faggot version of Zero. Fuck you for taking this wonderful series and potentially awesome story and shitting them up. Keep OC jerk-off to yourself.

hm...very interesting...better continue this...

The plot seems well thought out and the story is written very well. Overall, it'd be a totally awesome fic if Roll weren't a Mary Sue. If she could get over her godmoddy, invincible self, this would be one of the most awesome fics ever. Word to the wise, programmed for fighting is not greater than over three centuries of experience. Please note: not a Zero fangirl. Anyways, I look foreward to reading more. I hope you put out a new chapter soon.

This is excellent.

you finally updated again after a long time, yay! i'm really enjoying this, but does Axl really have to be like... a little weird? i mean, he's my favorite character! anyway, nice job, keep up the good work.

I like the twins, they seem to be pretty calm and easy going for people with such extraordinary powers. Figures they can't see X, but can they see Sigma?

Roll was built by Light, not Cossack. Any improvements to her design would have to have been made by him.

He does. She's dead. That's my premise, punk.

Every now and then you find a trule memreble fan fic tihis is one of them

Oh this is rich! A good long story about something that if it were ture, would be wicked cool! Oh please could you in some random humor moments?