Hmmm. Everything is all over the place. Especially the POVs. *shrugs*

I like.

i love it

I love this story soooooo much and i love you for writing it !

Adding yourself to the story? really? This would have been a great story if you hadn't added this OC so late on, or had a good reason to introduce her as someone important. Right now this OC is just hovering around. Is it not inappropriate to have her interrupt a scene where a family is supporting their injured adoptive son? Furthermore, she straight up tells Ron, after he's in shock from seeing Harry collapse and have a fit, that the pain Harry's in currently is practically nothing - "I've been here a number of times, much worse off than Harry mind you." It felt as if she was belittling the abuse Harry suffered. Not cool. Not cool at all.

Why did you turn this into a self-insert?! There was no need, at all. The story was going just fine and then out of the blue, there you are a member of the Order and claiming to have been in the hospital before...I'm sorry but adding the self-insert was completely unnecessary to where this story was going. You should consider changing your summary (which originally made me interested in reading this) to include your self-insert so other readers are not blindsided. I'm sorry if this in any way offends you, I'm just so disappointed by the completely addition of the character. You had something really awesome and heartfelt just focusing on Draco and Harry, which is what your summary and author's notes at the beginning of the chapters imply this is about, and having the insert just abruptly took away from that. I'm just sharing an opinion, but I hope it is taken into consideration. Thank you.

aww. really love this so far!

oh goddd... :'o

It was going great! I loved it! But... you turned me off with the constantly switching POV's and the OC. Sorry

Please send me the link. I just read this story and LOVE it I'd love to read the one on tumblr but it's too far back to find. My email is dracorox 418 at yahoo dot com Just take the spaces out

I actually like Minta...She reminds me of Luna, like you referred earlier.

your first chapter certainly made an impact. i really hope draco DOES make a change of heart. harry needs his help. off to read more :)

Just saying, Draco wouldn't have been able to say the address of Grimmauld place because his parents were there.

Not too sure on the whole Minta thing... I don't really like new characters who are main but an apparent subplot. There are also a few grammar errors, no apostrophe, wrong too, their, you're etc. Also I feel as if the Weasley's were far too accepting of Draco. I hope there is more detailed slash scenes soon, otherwise I may discontinue with the fic. Nice plot and idea though. Excellent, though it needs a little work.

Nicely written, with good character development. You dealt with a lot of touchy issues and handles them well. Thanks for a great read!