| Reviews for Forsaken |
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   Searching for Blood chapter 5 . 8/18/2010 Great story. But wouldn't Bungie have to give you Halo and it's respective franchise? |
| Chia Jeng Yang chapter 5 . 5/16/2006 Interesting, it was good. Pls reply, I think you're ready for the next level of writing. |
| Psychic Werewolf Assassin chapter 19 . 5/15/2006 Finally an update after all this time. |
| Warrior of Virtue chapter 19 . 5/15/2006 Giant Flood go boom. That was cool. Update soon. |
| Shadow Katz chapter 1 . 5/10/2006 Hey when are we going to get more on Forsaken? you should continue this story it is quite good |
| keastervbn chapter 8 . 3/20/2006 eepich mroeloov shinaww vo larrge! (hunter for "huzzah, amazing, im happy!) |
| Shadow Katz chapter 18 . 9/23/2005 Hi I just wanted to tell you that I think Forsaken is an absolutely awesome story and that you should continue writig it. I think that writing it from Hunters point of view is completely original. There were parts that were a bit confusing to me. But other than thatit is a wonderful story. I have one question is Klez going to run into Master Cheif again? well Email if you want to talk to me I just started my account so it will be a while for any of my stories to show up. good-bye |
| dark lord miho chapter 18 . 8/16/2005 this fic has confused me. hunters are hives, they are composed of lots of smaller organizmes so you cant just have one perspective. but it is a really good fic. continue please |
| Animaeus chapter 18 . 8/11/2005 Oh! I love how you write the space battles so well and with such tension :D Great work! Can't wait for part 3... waited to long for this one ;_;... |
| Sirius's Crazy Chick chapter 17 . 8/6/2005 Nice. Glad to see you updated. Its really good right now. ~SCC~ |
| Marie Delcore chapter 1 . 8/1/2005 Love the first Chappie Tim. Its Ashley Wolf :P |
| Psychic Werewolf Assassin chapter 18 . 7/14/2005 Why the hell did you mess up the story flow with Ch17? It was going fine until you put in Red vs. Blue. |
| Krayt'heili chapter 5 . 7/14/2005 Thi is getting really good! wow, but i guess i need to read the next chapies, so, yeah. Nice story! |
| Warrior of Virtue chapter 18 . 7/11/2005 I look forword to more carnage. Update soon. |
| angelicdhampir2oo4 chapter 17 . 7/11/2005 Okay.. lots of chapters missed, not a lot of space... So here goes. Plain and simple, Excellent. Though I favor the chief, you actually made the marines seem more like worthwhile warriors than useless cannon fodder in the way of their personalities. I actually felt bad for a few of them. Excellent battle scenes as always, and realistic dialogue as far as the elites and humans go. and as for the.. ah.. Interesting ch.17... Um... all i can say is that it was different... very different. Anywho... to sum up, good job. -peace. |
