Hey, I have brain cells! Really, I do! Otherwise I wouldn't be in advanced classes, now would I? Hmph.

He he:

Clue: "I can move pretty fast when I feel like it."

Jak: "When you feel like it?"

Clue: "Yes, that's the operative word."

Now, who is Reece is this Reece mentioned at the end again? Confusion.

THAT WAS TOTALLY WICKED LENI!

Flame: (About to kill Clue) What...did...you...call...me?

Now now flame.

Flame: HE CALLED ME BRAINLESS! HE'S DEAD!

Flame: Damn! I wasn't in this chapter!

IT ROCKED LENI!

Flame: BUT I WASN'T IN IT!

I know...to bad too...but it still rocked.

Flame: BUT My COMMANDER WAS! ARG! DAMN IT! IT'S NOT FAIR! SIT!

*WAM*

MR. Lightbright! That was cool freaky light eco powers!

XD lightbrite! XD that's an excellent name for lightjak! XD though in the game, it never showed him in pain while he went blue...but then again, there were a lot of things the game didn't bother to show. great chapter, hope to see another one soon. oh, and it's ottsel not otsel. i think that's about it. *nodnod*

Magic! Not. Grr, I have to write Leaper Children, bye!

YEAH BABY! METAL DEADS! ALRIGHT LENI! KEEP UP THE FUCKING GOOD WORK!

now i know what you were talking about in fooi

Uh... sorry I forgot to review. Can't think why I didn't. Anyway, here is a review for this chapter at least. Still a great story. I hope you'll keep writing, even though you're going through a rough time right now. Bye for now!

one word...EW!

love the last conversation! XD that would so be me and i friend of mine's XD

I love Jules and the dancing eye!

Alright another chapter. You mentioned Clue, but I wanted a chapter with him in it and maybe action sequences. Oh well. Maybe next time. Update soon!

yesh, jak is short ;_; in the first game he was like the tallest! and now he's like the shortest male in the world besides vin samos and kor (human form) other then that he's like a head smaller then everyone even the girls! ( jak: stop making funof my hihet!)(yes i spelled that wrong)

heh heh heh. That was a little funny. Stupid kids! Not a very meaningful chapter, but I guess you explained what all those marks everywhere in Spargus are for. Interesting.

2 gangs and a thieves guild in one city make for a lot of action! Get back to Clue, man! He's the most interesting character in this story. And update soon.