Like teh start get more chapters out soon.

I remember this, so happy you're continueing it.

Just reread the whole thing and am totally caught up in it again. I love it.

Hope you can update soon, need to know who is in D'Argo's head. Have a couple of ideas, want to see if I'm right.

You still have all thier voices down pat.

Adolescense. True to the nature of young teens, exploring their feelings, but even better. I think young Dargo, finally realizes the problem his dad has had all along. Young Dargo is about to venture into some uncharted territories. :D

I'm glad you're updating this. I'm enjoying this immensly. But, somehow, the updated chapter is not showing up, and some chapters show error not found. FFnet is on the blink, so hopefully soon, I will have the opportunity to see your lates installment. :D

Okay, I know it's pretty unlikely that you will ever update this, here, since it has been.. nearly three years. But go on, give it a go? It's good, I like it. Not that I matter, particularly, but you know.. get the creative juices flowing, or.. whatever. Liked this: "So what the hell, leap." Drunken advice is the best, if it doesn't sound too much like an insult: You write it well. Anyway, thanks.

I love this! I can't believe it only has four reviews, it's great. Witty dialogue, not overly complex prose, and some nice insights. The references to the whole.. farscape universe are accurate, and it's as in-character as I expect from a bunch of teenagers - which is as far as it can be, with original characters. So i like it, yeah. Well done.

Interesting twist.. I can't wait to read more.

maea

I'm loving it so far. Great characterization and dialogue. The scene jumps were a bit abrupt at first, but I like the way you marked them in the later chapters. I hope to read more of this soon.

maea

You need to check your story. You've got some formatting problems courtesy of FFN. Their system often erases transition marking used to mark a change in scene. As a result it's hard to tell where the change occurs and the reader is left wondering, 'when did he get there?'

When can we expect your next update..