Wah, you updated and I didn't notice! I'm ashamed. But good poem, especially the line "We are both dreamers". Good luck with your next update!

I enjoy reading these. Even if they're sad, they're very well-written.

Thanks for updating!

Good luck.

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( for the sadness

Great take on (waht I think) is a Megumi train of thought. I like the variation of your poems, not the smae thing over and over again.

This oe just made my jaw drop. Amazing.

Nice rhythm, definately.

Such a sad poem. ( Will you write anymore? These are so beautiful. All of them. Was Chapter 4 from Tomoe's perspective? I couldn't be too sure - but it could also be Megumi. At least, that's what I thought.

Please update soon.

Thank you very much.

Good luck.

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Very touching, and well written.

Wow... this one was very deep, absolutely beautiful, and rather tragic as well! Poor Megumi...

P.S. - After reading WhiteRabbit5's review I realize it's probably a Megumi take on Kaoru. But still, I think it applies to both, no?

pego

I love it.

Tomoe, right? It's amazing how you convey so much feeling in so few sentences. Maybe that's the reason why it's so strong.

Two parts I absolutely love are:

"He could never truly love me, one who knows

Too well what he is Maker of."

and:

"And for that I could almost hate you.

my sister, my friend

for that I could almost hurt you"

Very melancholy but very accurate, I think.

x] I love it!

pego

In my opinion, this is Megumi talking to Kaoru. Personally, I think this is the most creative take on that triangle. I never thought about it that way. That Kenshin can't love Megumi because she knows what it's like to be a killer. It makes a lot of sense, though, so I applaud you for a very well-written and well-thought-out poem.

WOW.

This is definitely a well-written poetry. It's short but nicely done and full of creativity. It's such a great piece... erm, pieces and people who don't like this are really missing out on one of the most greatest work in Fanfiction!

I give high props!

This poem touched me and almost drove me to tears. Even though this is your first poem (I think...) it is wonderfully written. Please continue! :D

Yeah, I sorta got the inspiration for the Kenji part from your poem. Sorry if it's plagerism, it just inspired me. O.O

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Hmm...I don't know about the other two. They're good, but after the Kenji one they sort of faded away...I just love it. It's so emotional and pained and you still have your great meter.

I can see how Kenji would hate Kenshin, although it makes me sad to admit it...I think your poem captured Kenji's position where his father is involved.

Beautiful.