Me realizing that you missed the oppurtunity to let hinata beat Hiashi. Proving that she could of been the head and defeated neji and hanabi without any pressure and that Hiashi is in the wrong.

Me: AHHHHHH!

I had been enjoying the story until this chapter, but i just cannot abide by this. Not only based on the way Jiraya told him does naruto have every right to be pissed off, I cannot see any situation in which this Jiaya would be this deliberately cruel. Actually ruined the fic for me.

This sucks

Frankly if you're still around Jiraiya deserved to be hit by Naruto! " I didn't feel like it!" If Tsunada had been there to hear what the bastard said she would have hit him too!

This was a very sweet chapter.

good story...nice plot

naruto can not beat sasuke but if a hiashi ok

blind fool only now at the end do you understand 'reffering to his ability to doubt hinata's skills'

Good story.

This was a great story, I can't wait to continue it in the sequel. When the whole Naruto sibling thing was introduced, I was a bit afraid, because I haven't been able to find a story that executed that concept well. However, this story managed to do it nicely, I'm kind of glad that his sister is only physically like him, with only some traits they share mentally speaking. The pacing for the story was excellent, I never felt bored or thought a chapter/arc was dragging on. All the fight sequences were interesting to watch, you had the perfect length for them.

What if Naruto isn't the Sixth Hokage...

That event that happened in the morning was hilarious and also, I'm glad the preliminaries for the Chunin exam were so short. I was dreading having to read 4-5 chapters on it, but I'm glad it was only a single chapter.

That scene with Gaara and Naruto was absolute perfection, in fact I read it twice because of how good it was. You nailed Gaara's personality so well. Also, while this is a Naruto and Hinata story, I love the brotherly/friendly relationships that the story is developing between Naruto and Sasuke/Neji/Gaara. Some of the characters are a little OC (not Naruto, Sasuke, Neji, or Gaara), but having some OC moments is expected, and they aren't bad moment either.

Ino, Hinata, and Naruto on a team with the most perverted sensei ever. This will be interesting, since Ino is the most perviest Konoha 11 member, plus then you have Naruto and Hinata...I can already see many awkward moments between the two.

This is a great start to the story, it already captured my interest.