You know it’s going to be a good story when the first scene just GETS you. And let me tell you... this definitely captured my attention. Holy crap. You are objectively a fantastic writer.

Let’s go in order, shall we? First - curl up and dye? So hilarious. So punny. AND SO TYPICAL OF HAIR SALONS! At this point, I knew I liked the story. But I had no idea what a diamond I had found.

Next - the little government propaganda song lyric snippets? Incredible! Did you come up with those yourself? Are they from something else? How are you writer people so talented.

Then - the whole bike thing. She recognized him but had never seen him? Interesting... She had said she was indebted to him, but only as a social convention thing? Very interesting... AND THEN INIYASHA KILLS HER?! Also quite interesting. To say the least. Dun dun dun!

And lastly, this gem - her final passing thought is that she’ll be found by a hobo on a Thursday in a dumpster. So funny. So completely and absolutely hilarious.

Basically, I love this. You’re So. Freaking. Amazing.

Nice story.. it got me hook and then leaves in hanging...in any case.. very well written

Years ago, I used to read your fics as you were updating them. A new story or a new chapter never failed to delight me. From time to time, I will reread a fic. They fill me with nostalgia and remind me of a simpler time in my life. I hope that you are able to continue to write stories and create works of art that inspire and touch others hearts as these fics have inspired me. Part of me hopes you are still writing, even if it’s not FanFiction. Wishing you all the best and thank you for all the lovely stories. You truly are a talented person.

After every reread I think... hmm, I can probably map out a vague idea of where the plot was headed next! White-haired dude who isn’t IY? Must be Sess! It would be a perfect twist for IY to think he had died in the April Showers but hadn’t really. Sess having a connection to Naraku’s boss? Very likely! Both affiliated with the government thereby giving Kagome an “in”? Possible! Kagome taking down massive governments/orgs with Sess’s help... why not! It happened in Price of Freedom! And then I remember the twists and turns from Dead Famous and realize... nope... the story probably had three totally unique and convoluted twists coming up that I could never guess. Anyway, it’s fun to reread and find clues. I like playing detective.

I love the fact that you used “lorry” after last chapter’s A/N. Lol.

Aww damn you haven't updated in years :( I really hope you come back! I'm looking forward to it!

CURL UP AND DYE IS A SALON NEAR ME OMG

loooove this story!

Can you please end this story with a final chapter?

Please, I am begging of you: update. This story has left me with an unfulfilled, gaping hole of sorrow at having not been updated. This is easily one of my favorite stories, as it is witty, thoughtful, and beautiful.

i know this was last updated in 2006 so theres no hope but !
i would make shrine for you if you ever looked at this again no joke

Where are you..

2016. will this story ever end?

Hopefully you update sometime, even though it's been years lol :(

Hey Torenzo,

Just wanted to say that even though it's been 10 years since you've updated this story, you should continue it if you ever get bored enough. I've trolled around your stories and they're incredible, this one no less. Your writing is witty and fun and is such a joy to read. And you are a sass queen, and it's incredible. Big big fan, you've inspired me to try and write my own fics. Hope life is going well, and hope you get super bored one day and decide to update. My email inbox will be waiting for the notification.
Cheers,
Anon.