| Reviews for Life in the Service |
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   NillyNarwhal chapter 9 . 3/12/2014 Wow, it's hard to believe this fanfiction was written when I wasn't even ten yet...anyhow, I love stories centering on the team (along with a side of royai) and this one is actually funny. Seeing as its been a good number of years since your last update, I'll just assume Ch 9 is the end. Great job. |
| skele-gro chapter 9 . 7/27/2010 definitely very amusing, i hope this gets updated sometime soon. it has a lot of potential and certainly is a good read. |
| cullengirl91 chapter 9 . 1/21/2010 this story is great! i laughed the whole time i was reading it! cant wait to read more! |
| Guardian Spirit chapter 9 . 10/30/2008 This is utterly fantastic. You had me laughing the entire time I was reading. Your characterization is so good! One of my favorite things about FMA is the interactions between the soldiers and you managed to capture that perfectly. I only wish there were more chapters. |
| TaiyakiiChan chapter 6 . 7/20/2008 Kyahh~~ i totaly love your story haha but i don't get some of the stuff likee the one where the secretary was apologizing and the thing about alchemists not using guns XDD |
| TaiyakiiChan chapter 1 . 7/20/2008 I dunno why, maybe i'm stupid or my nap addled my brains but...i REALLY didn't get this chapterr was the calendar model Hawkeye? |
| PunkZZZ chapter 9 . 7/8/2008 Poor Breda :( Everybody's picking on him. But it does make for a good story XD Great job! ~Artemis |
| PunkZZZ chapter 5 . 7/8/2008 Aw, Hayate is so cute! I love all the interactions between Mustang and Hawkeye (Go Royai!) Poor Havoc. T~T ~Artemis |
| PunkZZZ chapter 1 . 7/8/2008 Omygosh, this is absolutely hilarious! I love the idea of all of these characters and their "life in the service" - and you did a really good job of writing this too! ~Artemis |
| Sonar chapter 8 . 3/15/2008 lol. Nice job. |
| Sonar not signed in chapter 4 . 3/15/2008 Great job. |
| Anonymous chapter 2 . 9/13/2007 I like your story! The only part that kinda didn't match the story was that Breda is intelligent; he just doesn't look it. |
| The Flaming Bitch Alchemist chapter 9 . 7/31/2007 Haha, Hawkeye smoking weed? Sweet.. |
| Perennial Rhinitis chapter 9 . 7/4/2007 Are they, like, smoking marijuana? Mustang and Hawkeye I mean? That doesn't sound amusing. Cancer sticks and drugs just don't work for me; I grew up being taught to hate the stuff and I guess my imagination is wild enough for me not to need hallucinogens, you know? The other parts are funny though. Keep updating. X3 |
| emeraldcyclone chapter 5 . 1/24/2007 Ah! I wondered what they were doing while I was reading through. . Sparring? Good one! XD I never saw it coming. |
