Don't stop! PLEASE CONTINUE!

That was sweet. you could've given inu and kags a little more fluff,though. don't worry, you don't have to be japanese to use those words. i use them regularly in my fanfics.

Thanks for updating... I honestly thought you'd never update...

Wait a second... Sessho-aru actually helping InuYasha? How loony... But it is sweet. You go fluffy!

this story is so good! Please make an update

Ah

This is so sad!

Wheres the rest?

I need to know what happens to kagome in the end!

Please continue.

Teehee

Love sally.

This is one of my hands-down, favorite Inuyasha fan fics EVER. It's been a while since you've uploaded this story, and you were mentioning a second chapter... I think that this fic should DEFINITELY be continued. I want to know what happens during the aftermath of Kagome's death! Poor Inuyasha...

I hope that the lack of updating is due to school and whatnot and not FLAMES. If there was a single story I wanted more of, this would definitely be it! Hopefully, this has helped to convince you to continue. *hinthint*

Keep up the good work!

Kalliel

*adds to story alert*

*adds to favorite stories*

This is the best story ever! I love it so much. It's so sad. Please coninue this story. It's the best story I've ever read. I've read this story six times and it gets better every time. I know you haven't updated recently, but please, please do!

-Tapioca Ball

Ignore those mean reviewers. They don't know what they're talking about!

I think you should turn it in to a full story because it was short and kinda cut off! Godd story though!

‘After all, losing your love once is hard enough, but twice?’

Kikyou died three times. (Naraku killed her again in book 28, but Kagome kind of 'brought her back to life' in book 31. I'm not saying that you made a mistake about it; almost no one has read that far in the manga. I'm just letting you know for future reference.)

'...Sango with her leg broken and twisted in an unnatural way.'

'...Sango stormed past Kagome to walk with Kirara and Shippo.'

Sango can't walk with a broken leg.

'...familiar sound of flesh meeting flesh.'

Sorry, that just sounds wrong. Yuck.

The words 'Iron Reaver Soul Stealer' and 'Wind Scar' annoy some people, like me. I'm not saying your at fault for using thise words, I just hate the English dubbing for Inuyasha. ::shudder::

'...the blood seeped into her lungs...'

Kagome would die really fast if her lungs were ripped open too.

“InuYasha, I love you.” “Kagome, I . . . I love you too.”

Inuyasha and Kagome wouldn't straight out tell each other that they loved each other. They're just not that kind of person.

Also, please don't use words like "mutt-face". They sound stupid (like English dubbing, which, as mentioned before, I hate, and cannot watch.)

Also, why aren't Miroku and Sango mourning Kagome too? Don't they care?

-Zora

Make more! Please?

That was really good! but hey... please one more chapter! Kag can't die! She means the WORLD to Inuyasha... please...

one more puppy dog eyes

aw well, u decide what to do!

Ciao for now!

I think it is a great story I like it but the ending is kinda bad. It is good but leaves to much suspence. You could have Sesshy bring her back with the tenseiga or something. Anyway I would like to see some more to go with it. Even if it is just one extra chapter.

believe me, i know what it like to be depressed. Strange, ive been meeting alot of depressed ppl here... oh well. i can see why this is a great way to open up.

Loved your story but i think that all events consididered, a one shot is too short for so many to happen at once. I would definatly suggest you make this into a multi-chapter story. I would really like it if you would find a way to bring her back though, i mean the way she was. I love the Inu-Kag paring too so see if you can find a way to make it work? For me? (Puppy Eyes)

Oh and please look at my fanfics, only two, i'm kinda new.

: How Could I let this happen? suprisingly similar to yours hm. lol jk its all good.

:Inuyasha Not Without You still working on it but take a look at it anyway. Kinda the flip of my first one.

Upon reading them, you find how obsessed i am the wiht the concept of :Happily Ever After

I only think that you should draw out the moment when Kagome died. You can't sum it up in only a few paragraphs. Duh. Sorry, but it's da truth.

-FaNTa

I hate to say this, but keep it a one-shot. It doesn't make a whole lot of sense.

The characters are more OOC than even I could manage, THERE ARE NO FALCONS IN JAPAN, Sango could not be merrily walking down the road planning her wedding if her leg was brutally twisted in the fight with Naraku, 'Iron Reaver Soul Stealer' is the ugliest word I have ever seen (nothing against you, just the word) and it was more funny than angsty, dialogue-wise.

Also, Sesshoumaru must've been MIGHTY close to hear that, WHY AREN'T SANGO, MIROKU, AND SHIPPO ANGSTING OVER KAGOME'S DEATH TOO, and the mix of Japanese terms (i.e: miko, youkai, etc.) and horrid dubs like 'mutt-face' and 'iron reaver etc.' is disconcerting.

Like it or not, I am brave enough to flame and leave a signed review, unlike people who don't have the backbone to get a response.

I never said I did not like the concept/idea of the story, just the few cultural differences. Thank you. I and no one else affiliated with me holds responsibility for my words and actions.

If you're like the people I know, you won't be saddened or discouraged by this review. It will only provide a bit a comic relief.

Melon-chan