that was awesome, this made me blush a lot. ;)

shinooooooooooo *love love* cute fluff!

Wow this was really good!
Trus it didn't suck at all, it was very well written, entertaining and a little sad!
So great job!

This is a very sweet story. I enjoyed how it flowed, even with Hinata cut open. Lol

I could have sworn I had read the majority of the Shino-Hinata fics awhile back, but this is like the oldest one, and I suppose I hadn't...Though I am not sure that the name is befitting, I do like fic itself. It was very Shino-like.

Sweet with just the right amount of heat. In short, I love it.

Very nice indeed. They were both in character.

Concrit: The only thing I could see that could use work is filling out the emotions a little more. Well maybe that's not quite what I mean... You did a good job of expressing thier emotions at the begining, but I would have liked a little expansion on thier afterglow. It seemed cut short to me.

aww, after this story i like hina/shino. this was the most sweetest thing. i loved it so much there was so much emotions so much detailed i cried. wow hinata ans shino, to now well reed why he's got his jacket on wow, but hinata didnt let that freak her out. shino is so super sweet...100 thumbs up, nicley done.

Incredibly, incredibly sweet.

very well written :D

Shino's very sweet

Oh my gosh ... this was the prettiest lemon I've ever read. It's not so much as erotic and hot as most lemons try to aim for, but it's like ... heart moving. It's as if it's about making love, not about two characters having sex and how good they feel. I love this a lot.

"He came after, startled by his own intensity and the helpless way he spiraled down, chasing her."

3

hurray for shinohina~ and quite a few others~ hee

wow...wow. this is my 1st time actually reading a ShinoHina fic despite me being interested in this pairing! and it was so cute! well the 1st part was cute and innocent while the 2nd part was.. well not so innocent :P

and no i don't think you made them ooc and it definitely didn't suck. hah i can see Hinata being the cute possessive lover..:D

Oh... shivers went down my spine at that last sentence... Lovely. Absolutely lovely.

"You're mine now."

Shino/Hinata isn't a usual pairing and actually, this is the first one I've read of it! But I really really loved it! Well, I loved your story! I don't know if I'll continue reading this pairing but... this gives me some hope! Or maybe you can recommend some for me? LOL

Awesome work!

I loved this story, so sweet...