do your homewor k please put that before fanfiction

I feel the embarrassment and nervousness in this story

Far to many chapters of talking and have to see what Dumbledore says. James is Harry's father and would go straight to the castle to see his son. Good story up to that point.

Oh Moony, I love you!

Oh poor Harry for having to live through that

James will get so upset, I can feel it

Sirius must be the best at giving hugs tho, in a time of need like this one

Oh god, this is getting to me emotionally

Sirius said seriously

SiRiUs sAiD sErIoUsL Y

Thank you, because even though you stopped updating and have probably forgotten about this, I have been completely engrossed in this story and I can honestly say this is one of the best fan-fictions I have read (minus some small mistakes (It is cruciatus)).

NEXT TIME! THIS WAS 11 YEARS AGO! YOUR PROBABLY NOT EVEN ACTIVE ANYMORE BUT THIS IS AMAZING AND IF YOU EVER GET BORED THEN FEEL FREE TO WRITE SOME MORE. Although you are a lot older now, i wasn't even born when you published this. But this is really good and if you randomly happen to come across this then i hope you are still a fan and remember that people are still reading this, 14 years after you published it, and will do for many more years.

The House-Elf's name is Dobby. Not Doddy. Other than tat this s a fine piece of writing.

Hii I was kind of silently binge reading this story and sorry for not leaving reviews but I was so engrossed that i kind of forgot but I can't wait for the nexf chapter and to see where this story is going! You're a very talented writer keep up with the good work

10 years? Is that long enough to post 1 chapter? C'MON RHIS IS MY FAV STORY

No way! i was having sooo much fun reading this, i thought it was complete! How could you leave it ... 10 years!... :( :( don't get me wrong, you surely have your conditions and stuff but ... please :(