| Reviews for Destiny of a Dragon Warrior |
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   Kingkong101 chapter 8 . 10/11/2019 Sucks |
| my 2 guys chapter 8 . 8/9/2017 that was good keep the chapters coming |
| my 2 guys chapter 1 . 6/15/2016 that was good keep the chapters coming |
| Guest chapter 3 . 12/25/2015 You mean the hirashinn No jutzu his dad was minato namikase his mum was the uzumaki and the sunshine no jutzu is a skil every ninja can learn and a bloodline kan only be learned by somebody with the same blood so kakashi can't learn it and with the skills you described Naruto could easily defeat a jonin |
| blasterdog chapter 8 . 8/18/2010 this is amazing the whole thing is great you have to continue |
| Erora chapter 8 . 11/6/2009 OMG! I love it! Your story is really good. It's getting predictable though. Spice things up some. Good luck! |
| Erora chapter 4 . 11/5/2009 Awsome! |
| god of all chapter 8 . 7/3/2009 Great chapter and story so fair pleaces continue the story soon. |
| Gravity The Wizard chapter 1 . 6/8/2009 Please Continue Someday! |
| TheSlain chapter 4 . 7/24/2008 While I must admit this story has potential, you're going to need to refine your writing style. The use of the word "well" is over done to the Nth degree and becomes annoying very quickly, a good example of this is when Sarutobi and Jiraiyastart talking in this chapter, Sarutobi opens his first senetence with the word "well" and so does Jiraiya, grammaticly correct(I'm not entirely sure about that but I have graduated highschool) it is as mentioned above, annoying. its like lisyening to a badly written play. Another thing is actually how you're wording sentences, "is currently" would be considered grammaticly incorrect because it's redundant, just in case you don't know what redundancy is I'll give a short explanation. it's when you write a sentence or fragment that repeats that same idea more then once without a period in between the two. for something using that phrase to be grammaticly correct you would have to use a word that is in the past tense and then a word that is in the present tense, such as "was currently". I think I've babbled on long anough and gotten my point across, teh general idea? Work. On. Your. Grammar. I do like this fiction, just needs a little work, otherwise you have a great thing going, keep at it. |
| Amelia chapter 2 . 7/18/2008 Why was the second half of this chapter bolded and underlined? |
| wert1990 chapter 7 . 4/12/2008 please continue this storry |
| panther73110 chapter 8 . 3/11/2008 Are you going to finish this story? |
| momocolady chapter 8 . 2/11/2008 good story |
| Blackfang1983 chapter 8 . 1/9/2008 i wish u would update this story it's kick ass |
