This was extremely well written! Good job!

God, I first read this right about the time after it came out... and now went back to read it.

That line, about the jogger telling them to get a room has stayed with me ever since, as well as the last line uttered from Neo, " So, what about that room?"

In times of romantic sutautions I always thought back to it...

God, this is great :)

loved it

Pandora

Awww... Neo/Trinity! Cute! I like how you did Neo's thoughts. Very good.

Wonderful, i love all of your stuff, especially the romantics. thanx, keep on writing!

This is great! What more can I say?

One of the best.

heyyy you have lotsa stories here... I think I'll take my time and uhh.. read the matrix ones! this was a very kewl story. good job.

This story is great keep writin bout The Matrix

Very cool. Definitely a cool story. Being inside Neo's mind for a little bit is cool. Did I mention this is a cool story? :)

Awwww... I loved it... Sooooo romantic *Hearts popping out of my head*... *sigh*

Excellent stuff. Accurate and entertaining.