I just hope Atem won't does anything he could regret...like force Yugi to have sex with him without realising it because he think that the innocent little angel is in love with him.

Love it

When are you going to update?

It's kinda sneaky did he really steal Yugi from Seto or he doesn't know

Awww that's it? :( sad. Actually I think Seto was selfish and deserves to lose Yugi

update the next chapter please

Amazing chapter. Please post more of

I know it's been a long time since you last updated but if you're still around then please continue the story. The plot is amazing and I'd love to know what will happen next

Nice chapter. I enjoyed reading it. Update when you have the time, please.

This is brilliant!I love the plot and yo up the good work!
But I have a question. It says "He had never been kissed,and had never imagined his first kiss with the pharaoh."Didn't Yugi kiss Seto before? Maybe I'm looking too much into this,hmmmm...

I like it . Can not wait for the next chapter.

You know I really bloody love this story but I don't think you're ever coming back to it which is a shame and you should if you cherish the people who have read and loved your writing and plot. BE LOYAL AND FINISH IT BECAUSE WE ALL WANT TO READ WHAT HAPPENS.

awwww poor Seto, mean Atemu such a leecher...poor naiv Yugi
i really do hope that one day you come back or somebody else finishes this story...and dont let Yug jump so fast in Yamis bed...he really needs to work harer to wooe him

Oops sorry. I hadn't read the part about henna

Kisara's hair is white not red