I know this is just a oneshot song fic, but you should totally make this into a huge story :)

Okaay first, no it wasn't rushed. And second, I thought it was believable! Well... I have never heard that song before I read this fic!

But, I have to say, I really loved this story! The whole forbidden slash sexy thing goin on is soo hot! It wudda been awesome to see you continue this, but a one-shot is a one-shot eh? ..

*faves*

-asterisque.

I LOVE THIS FANFIC.! it would be nice 2 see serena date someone her own age and Darien getting jealous, oh yea how old are all of them anyways? Hope u update it soon :)

I'm interested. Update REALLY soon. _

Wow this is a cool story. The relationship seems forbidden. Is Usagi married? It wouldn't matter if she was; i like UM fics and yes they did stay in character. I want more UM action. They shouldn't wait till his birthday; it'd be more interesting if they didn't. Keep writing cuz i'll just die if you don't finish this!