Soun Proclaiming how [proud] he was

the mistake is that Proud is what Nodoka feels from Ranma being a manly man that is so popular that girls figth for his affection, a celebration of an achivement through skill and effort

the word here should be happy, glad or something similar to express a feeling of relive from reaching the bathroom in time or the happiness that Genma gets from having good food and a place to sleep for for no expenives

Yeah... can't stomach this anymore. Nodoka and Soun's wife stronger than Happosai?

Mmhmm, and Donald Trump is actually a humanitarian.

So, even after learning the truth of the matter regarding Ranma, this Kenosuke who very clearly liked Ranma when he was a child and would've liked to see his daughter marry him decides still to go through with something that (now) will kill him?

Way to end any sympathy I could harbor for this dickbag.

If they aren't clouded by delusion, Ranma's antagonists are too selfish and egocentric to turn away from their grievances.

I neither like the idea of Ranma having regularly lost to an opponent nor see it as something realistically a possible happening.

It runs contrary to who Ranma is; boundless confidence - such that it can be weaponized in a ki attack.

Losing once and MAYBE twice? Understandable as that happened in canon with some of his foes/rivals but it would always push him to overcome them and become even stronger. Hence, I don't really like the idea of these OCs apparently being superior in the art than our pig tailed protagonist.

~ mƸtroid

Will you be updating this story soon?

for one thing you misspelled sight as sight.

any plans to return to this story?

Another story I hope you pick up some day. I was really enjoying this one up until it stopped…

I really really hope you haven't completely given up on this story. It's too good to not finsh

Someone wanting to murder an innocent out of willful ignorance is not a good person. Weighing that person's life against the innocent they want to kill yields only one acceptable answer if the person refuses to turn aside from her chisen willfully ignorant path.

Yeah it sucks if Nodoka is killed by her own family, but at that point she'd have it coming.

If your looking for ideas

Have Ranma, Nabiki & Kasumi agree with Cologne that they are married
Have Ranma answer the door & greet Nodoka then the four go sign marriage certificate
Nodoka refuses Shampoo & Ukyo to be Ranma's mistresses
Cologne & Happosai get rid of the Nekoken

This will be GOOD:)

I hate thee not for the plot lines ye weave, but for the cliffhangers that precede thee

Definitely an incredible story!

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