It was decent. I really appreciate the effort, because there's not nearly enough decent SO3 romance out there. The pacing and development were good. There were a few typos here and there, but it wasn't riddled with them, at least. I do disagree with the interpretation of Albel as the strongest of the group, though. Fayt is clearly far stronger, even if you disregard his ability to blow up spaceships (and probably planets) at will. The Klausians are both way more powerful as well, able to shrug off lasers and punch holes through substances tougher than steel with their bare hands. It would take something like Fayt's spaceship-destroying beam to even damage either of them. Putting that aside as an acceptable difference in interpretation, this is a solid piece of work. Approved.

a little more than 10 years after pub and it's still awesome
i like how you wrote the story close to the storyline
the characters weren't out of character either
and it was funny because their small room in the diplo was completely spot-on (there was only one bed there for pete's sake!)

all in all it's just great :D

*sob* *sniff* this was inded a beautiful story, but... I Want A SEQUAL! not just me but to every other AlbelxNel fan or whatever thing catigory. i would like to see them together please

OMG! this is the sweetest best alnel fanfic i have ever read! but i wish that they DEFINENTLY end up together in the ending..please please please make a sequel!

Well written. I give you a 10/10 on this because this was simply brillant. Your good.

Hmm, well this story altogether is brillant and I love every piece of this. Great work Mizura! (slaps a high-five)

He always calls Nel a wench o how annoying but she seems use to it. Man, if that was me and I was saying my good byes to the guy I love... I'd cry and hold him close... I know that feeling, I believe I was in love once... I couldn't hug him... But I shed tears for him... and he shed tears for me... But we have grown distant now... or maybe its me... Love is SO damn confusing -_-. I enjoyed this chapter!

Aw, Albel and Nel kissed eachother _. LOL, Albel keeps blaming the heater o. Albel finally admitted his feelings :) I bet that was a struggle for him. This is a VERY interesting and amusing chapter, LOL.

Albel in a church doesn't mix! LOL, I agree with Nel big time. I think the part funny when Nel closed her eyes and tried to think of something other than Albel then in the last try she see's Albel, LOL. Oh boy, this should be interesting... Nel and Albel sleeping in the same room XD!

What a scary dream for Albel o.o... XD Hehe, Albel couldn't come up with a good enough excuse to why he was in Nel's room. Now this is both interesting, Albel doesn't hate Nel and Nel hugged him... how surprising and sweet. I like this chapter and this story is going under my fav stories list! Yes another story by one of my fav authors.

Nel sounds un-assure of herself when it comes to Albel, vice-versa with Albel's thoughts on himself and her. I think I would be uncomfortable if someone like Albel was in my room waking me up; I'd be freaked out, LOL. Aw, that was nice of Nel to help Albel out when he was hurt -. Nice chapter!

You do a very good job in writing about Albel. _ I enjoyed this chapter, like I said many times, you are a talented author.

Hi, hi! Its me _ I changed my name again and I think I'll keep this one. I've been recently addicted to AlbelNel fics and I'm glad I read yours! Afterall you are one of my fav authors :) I'll get back to that dynasty warriors fic I was reading once I find time ok? Part 1 of this is VERY interesting and I like the story already - your an awesome writer, I admire your talent. Hehe, Albel is as cold as ever and you seem to match their personalities very well. Good job!

THAT WAS GREAT! i cant believe i didn't read this before! to sum up the greatness of this fanfic i'll say this IT WAS AWESOME! I LOVED IT SO MUCH! albel and nel are my favorite pairing. it kinda pained me to not see them get together, but that gives this fanfic such potential for another story! and how even after they couldn't be together, they still longed for each other...WONDERFUL! it was such a great fanfic! fantastic!

aaw that's cute! I like how you've developed their relationship, and how they admitted their feelings for each other in the end. Too bad they didn't got together (yet). Anyway, this was very well written! thanks for writing it!