I loved this, but ugh, not everyone's perfect. Marcus is portrayed so well and kept human. He's not just one dimensional, I love how much character and thought was put into this. Short, but good!

Awwwww! :( Poor little Marcus! I think they would be a great couple... They complete each others, wich is really amazing. This fic, event hough it was short, was amazingly well written, I wish I had written it myself (this will not happen with my second-language English! Hehe!)!

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This is one of the most amazing fics i have ever read, the frenetic pace (full stop-less paragraphs) and desperation of Marcus' thoughts is gripping, and his utter self-loathing is just so well-portrayed.

i love how you've shown Marcus has a soft side, while still keeping him in-character by showing his violent streak (what an amazing study into human psyche! yes, some ppl are violent by nature, and yes they hurt the ppl they love, and yes they're sorry about it later, and yes they do keep doing it).

Just breath-taking.

That was really good...no one thinks Marcus has a heart, but you've shown it here. Bravo!

That was sweet, I like how you portrayed Marcus as someone who really cares about what happens if someone he loves is hurt and not just a stereotypical slytherin.

You have written this perfectly.

I can see, and more importantly, feel Marcus as I read this.

I just want to give him this hug.

oh my bleeding god.

i'm marcus flint. only the strong ones survive? my thoughts exactly! liked it better being numb? sure did!

oh shit, i guess this means i'm gonna have to make alot of calls to my exes...

thank you for this masterful piece of literary brilliance.

Oh my. That was beautiful. I loved it. It was so in character. IT was just wow.

Aww! That was good.

that was well written and way way to cute[in a good way]

i loved it!

aw! it's too cute!

Oh, that was lovely. Just beautiful. Marcus/Percy is an underappreciated pair! Really nicely done.

I read this a few months ago, and I simply just couldn't get it out of my mind. So I had to come and find it again, just so that I could tell you this is a beautiful fic and I enjoy reading every bit of it.

Bravo.

_ good fic. i really like the relationship you've mapped out for them - it's perfectly in character and very enjoyable to read. the subject for this is absolutely lovely. i especially liked the part of him not meaning to hit percy, but doing it anyway. the lyrics are a nice touch. awesome fic. however, there are a few too many run-ons.

Oh, that is lovely. I adore Marcus/Percy slash..it's so hard to find though! I really enjoyed this, Marcus' train of thought was believable... great job :D