Well, I do like your character, but don't you think they're a bit OP?
I mean, more gifted than Numair, better Wild Magic than Daine, acting like they can't trust either of their adoptive parents with all the information even though they've both proved themselves in previous adventures...
And then the constant compliments?
I like your writing style, but I just think if Romeli displayed some weakness, she might be more relate-able.

I don't trust the cook...

Well, first of all, it should be "here ARE your presents", not "here ATE your presents". but since your story is so good, I shall forgive you. Btw I don't believe that they had boyfriends back then, more like suitors would be for correct. But don't get me wrong! Amazing story, amazing writer, amazing moose! Haha

Your story is amazing. You should publish it (with Tamora's permission of coarse). Oddly Romeli reminds me of my main character in a story i am writing. good luck with the sequal. I am about to start reading it.

George lifted her chin up and looked deep into her chaotic eyes. "Yer face 's prettier than the Goddess' 'erself."

that sounds like Blasphemy. lol

I'm still reading this - and I still think it's amazing :)

And as for Jameson of Queenscove, the reason I figured out who it was was because of his sarcasm - then everything clicked. Congrats for making a character with sarcasm like his father :)

Okay so I've read about a million storys, paperback and on fanfic and this is honestlyone of my favorites EVER! :)

I'm only on chapiter 4, but it is seriously amazing. I love how realistic you made Romeli seem, and how she interacts with everyone around her. You used the theme of Tamora Pierces characters and story lines, but created an extremly impressive heroine. :D I am seriously beyond impressed. Well, I'm gonna read some more now, I shall review again once I am more done it )

There is too much THINKING in your story. frankly it's getting boring. PLEASE write n\more action. it's killing me. I was very excited to read this after the first few chapters. but then the sadness and angust is wearing me down. now all this emotional crap...

I reay like your characters and stuff but I think it would be bettter it you didn't make it so grim and slow the whole time.

and an you make it a happy ending?

Please don't let this story be depressing! It's getting tiresome. I love your story but this part is hard to get past.

THIS IS AMAZING! i haven't reviewed until now because I was so captivated by this story. It is soo great. it is defiantly m favorite story so far. I'd recommend it to first I thought this stor was going to be a mary sue so i stopped reading after the first chapter ( I'm shamed to admit it) but you manage to portray Romeli as a real person with troubles too. and the plot it self is amazing. I hope I can review more but I prorbably won't get to it untill I finish the whole story. It's just so great!

chapter 28 made me cry it was so sad but i kno wi t isnt th end but it is sooooo sad

Urm I think it's time she got over being depressed, I'm really bored with the story and think it needs something to make it attention grabbing, so I think you could do better that the last 5-10 chapters.

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OH MY GOOBER! IT'S OVER! Okay... so I remember reading this story like last year... then I completely forgot all about it... and now I just read straight through the entire story and LOVED it! It's amazingly awesomely FANTASTIC! :P

So how's the sequel going? I haven't looked at it yet... I'm gonna go do that now...

BYE!

~amethysteyes0

THIS IS THE BEST CHAPTER EVER! OMG IM LAUGHING SO HARD! LOLZ LOLZ ROFL LOLZ

~AmethystEyes0

Well, I personally like that phrase BECAUSE it wouldn't be funny in the first place. I exaggerate the words when I say it, the same way I'll exaggerate the 'seriously' when I say SERIOUSLY awesome or SERIOUSLY intense. I'm so hungry IT'S NOT EVEN FUNNY. (I know, right?)

Anyways, mooses, meese, moosies and meeses are awesome! Why not travel...see the majestic moose...a moose once bit my sister-no really!

Wow. I usually don't ramble like I am right now. I'll shut up now. I like your story.