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![]() ![]() Awwww! Malfoys actually kind of cute ! And dare I say sweet I loved your story! |
![]() ![]() Omg, I love that so much even though they weren't at school and they hadn't been talking for a while they still loved each other and that warmed my heaet . (If only I had a boy who would do that for me) |
![]() ![]() ![]() ...you know what I hate you forever now |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh yes I do hate you...right now |
![]() ![]() ![]() actually I did...sorry |
![]() ![]() ![]() DRACO |
![]() ![]() I loved your story right up until the ending and then you lost me completely. I don't understand why you would wait so long to get them together and throw a daughter into the mix :( such a shame |
![]() ![]() ![]() Although, i somehow always feel that hermione is being dumb by always giving too much of importance to someone who only takes advantage of her, being the brightest witch of her age means you have to be a little bit of every thing which also includes a little self- respect which i did'nt see in it. Other wise she would have already realised that she was being used for her brains . All i can say it was a good plot of story, could have done better. |
![]() ![]() Chapter 12 ruined it for me. The story was really rushed but I pushed though and got to 12 before turning back. The characters were all OOC and Hermione is stubborn and loyal, she wouldn't of forgiven her friends so easily if they hurt her like that, yes she would forgive them but after a bit of time and she would of stuck up for Draco and stuck to him because he was her rock. I can see you tried hard and I commend you for that. |
![]() ![]() ![]() awww cute :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I got into this story in the middle it was so good that I wen tback to thte beginning to read the whole thing |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww what's wrong with Draco!? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Dnt mind bt i ship dramione nd read many stories bt this stry really ws a disappointment to me...it is missing so many links in did try to write a different stry unlike the typicl clichés bt smhw ur flow was lost..i love dramione too mch so i cudnt leave the stry halfway bt u nid to write better nd imprve. It wud mke a grt stry if it wasnt missng links! Keep writing though u 'll imprve wid tym mayb! -Dracen |
![]() ![]() ![]() LOL gr8 ending |
![]() ![]() ![]() ooooooooo GOOD STORY SO FAR |