Mini-Carth?

To be posted 9 Apr 2010 on StarwarsKnights under The Critic returns and Lucasforums under the Critic’s Two Cents. Sorry it took so long.

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PostKOTOR: Trying to settle in together

It was interesting for them to still be on the Ebon Hawk considering what we had been told of their present mission. The relationship is moving, but they both have their little quirks, and Revan can’t keep from teasing him. The ending was choice, primarily because she does give a reason for staying there instead of their suite, and a perfectly good one too.

Pick of the Week

Ha ha ha ha. Oy that was funny.

Thank you.

wait! I want to hear this story! post it, please?

Very nice piece of writing! I was looking for a good carth-revan fic and I couldn't fin a good one! Then I found yours! Thank you! It is good to see that there are good writers out there!

Awesome! Are you writing more?

Also, when Revan said that she had destroyed his homeplanet and could do it again it did seem a little callous, and Carth would've reacted.

Cheers.

hehe...

You're vignettes are touching and effective, you use everyday activities to get to meaning stuff. And like everyone else who reads this, mini Carth is possibly the funniest thing I've heard of. Great job.

Well that's one way to tell Carth about the darkside XD

I'd love to hear your take on why she goes to the darkside...

And yet another wonderful addition. I love your writing style!

I'm pretty sure that I read the first two chapters over on kotorfanfic so it is good to see this being continued over here.

I love how these vignettes seem to focus on the small minutia of a relationship as well as the bigger problems of dating someone who is a former Sith Lord.

I have a special fondness for stories that explore or shed light on the Carth/Morgana/Revan dynamic. And I like what you have done with it here. Libra's feelings of insecurity are very, very natural. Nicely done.

I'm also a sucker for Malak stories, so I hope we get to see more of that...

And oh my! Mini-Carth! Rofl! That's priceless.

Heh. Do we ever get to hear the rest of *that* story? It sounds...interesting...

Hm...you may have a point there, but I'm not sure if that's the impression you want your summary to convey...

I'll go read that last chapter, shall I?

Mini-Carth! Hahahahaha! Good one that.

Another great chapter! Been away for a little while so this review is kinda late. Funny one. Dirty old Jolee, he should know better than to peek at others while... *ahem*

Trust T3 to keep a secret...