thats really good! and did i catch a teeny hint of lark/niko in there or was it just random? anywho yup

BANZAI!

~hollybridgetpeppermint

This was a wonderful story; it's so true the book, but from a completely different point of view. The emotion just flowed.

I like the concept of this fic... I adore those "scenes from another POV" types. It would've been neat to REALLY get into the adults' heads - especially Moonstream, since she's the one we understand the least as a character. I think this fic should've had MORE. More descriptions, more fears, more stress. Another thing it might've benefited from was a beta-reader. The first sentence is repetetive, with using "not with Rosethorn" twice (only once is necessary) and an extra "not" thrown in in a grammatically improper manner. There's so much potential here, though. :)

Very good. loved it.

I loved it. It was a great idea and well written and thought out.

Excellent.

What more can I say?

it does not suck! very good, i thought.

This doesn't suck! I don't know why you think that. I thought it was really well written.

*sigh* Every idea for a one shot I've had I find. Well, at least I can read yours and not have to write mine.

I probably wouldn't write it was well, anyway.

~ Lady Black Widow ~

I love this fic it is so awesome you are an amazing author. Write more stories!

It is so sweet.

Just one little typo: In your summary, you wrote Rosethron not Rosethorn. See? It's little. Otherwise, great job!

HOW SWEET!

Daja: "What a ride" For some reason that made me laugh. I'm insane, I've even got a certificate that says so, so maybe that wasn't supposed to be funny...But W/E. GREAT!

LOVELY! I really, Really, REALLY like it. Very well written. I wish you would continue it but it is a one shoter :-(. Good Job

No, it's good, I like a lot. It was a great idea for a story.

wow. this was very well written. interesting that u write about this particular scene. *shrugs* i loved it and hope to see more winding circle fics from you! :)