You should mention the right pairings in the summary or just the beginning of the first chapter you should have written the WARNING

uh...

U bastard is that how it end that's okaly good but gay!

This author has porblems

Very interesting rendition,I enjoyed much

This is good

truly different.

I have to ask:

What in the name of all that's holy is wrong with you?

Sure, I started this fic knowing that it was a conquest for Harry's virginity. But this is ridiculus.

Sex for Sex's sake is not what every teenaged girl does. The fact that Hermione of all people would be shagging for the sake of the act is so OOC that it's painful to imagine.

Before you write one more story, do yourself a favour and study how people act, and not just those in the popular circles.

Some people have enough respect for themselves that they won't just sleep with whoever just to get off.

i loved it!

I can't wait until you update. The last couple of chapters were slightly confusing, but I understand everything now.

This is extremely well-written.

Very well done, i dont usually read this kind of stuff but it was recommended to me by a friend, and i liked it. Cant wait for the next two chapters

please continue the story please and thank you

The way it's so OUT of character and IN character at the same time is mind boggling...and addictive. Now I have to read what happens next...lol

-stray

OMG i loved it, sure it did get a bit confusing but i think i got the jist of it :) i love this story its awesome, don't stop writting please :)

yayayyayayayaayayayayayay! see the good pplz always winz