A great one-shot here! I'm glad it had a happy ending!

a pissed off son videl hissing saying to her daughter while spanking her daughter pan you don't spank attack your mom spank no matter what i may or may spank spank of did and there is spank spank and i don't want you to spank spank spank what i am going to say i would rather spank spank spank walk into a lion den wearing a meat suit spank and as for you two son goten and son gohan clang clang clang clang son goten that s for letting my daughter attack me her mom and now to deal with my husband oh son gohan get your butt back here right now don't make me chase you all over our house clang clang clang why the hell would i leave the one boy that i went through hell trying to hey said boy to notice me for a another boy that i gave two black eyes a broken arm and fingers and told sharpener repeatedly that i am not his girlfriend that he is not my boyfriend

Videl to gohan sorry for the way that I treated you i did never stop like ving you it was my dad idea that I marry sharpener

Mitigé.

Worst fanfic I ever heard dude really it was just crappy

too frigging morbid, if u ask me, though a bit on the creative side, with some action and drama and at the end a happy ending , so nice piece of work u did thank u

U should put it up

ummm wow? I like the concept and the plot of the story.. but to be honest? the way you write it kinda makes it hard (at least for me) to read. The flow is too fast, and without enough explanation you just keep plowing ahead, like when without enough reason you (Kais) revive the entire Son family.

I'm terribly sorry if my review are too harsh but that is because I think you can do better than this and after 7 years I do hope your other works are better than this :)

Like I said, I like the concept and the plot of this one. And if you ever want to redo this one please PM me :)

Very interesting my friend! I still love this show and was thinknig about writing up a sequel script myself, but yours is awesome! wonder what happened to vegeta tho... prolly died :P

this fic is epic love the started but the ending suck i was hoping that videl would get what was coming to her. never was much of a videl fan but still read videl and gohan because thats how the anime was.

Do not put up the damn story!

I don't think that Videl even likes sharpener the tiniest bit. Couldn't you havemadeher fall in love with someone less annoying?

I loved this story! It may have been short, but it was simple and very emotional.

I like basic, one shots like this. You may have composed the entire story into one chapter, bt I'm happy with this. Please don't get rid of it, I love reading this. The positive bit about this is that...well...I'm glad that Gohan and Videl got together in the end, it made things all worth while.

Awesome work, and I applaud the idea.

AlphaDelta1001

I'm deadpan and I laughed my ass of reading this story

That is such a great idea for a fic. But you did make Videl a b* in the beginning. SO sad though...Gohan died of a BROKEN HEART. It turned out happy in the end! GREAT ONE-SHOT-ER! -

Love, DarkStarr221 :)