So far I like it

Ok I'm not trying to be a critic but you spelt a name wrong it's Ulrich I'm a big fan of this show and might be a big fan of yours if I like your story

If you are still on , PLEASE FINISH THIS

it's the science and homeroom teacher not the algebra teacher and it's Suzanne Hertz suzanne is her first name hertz the last name

Hey you should do a fanfiction where Jeremy is fourced by his thoughts to go on lyoko to help but he's not good but he's dark prince of lyoko and aelita is fourced to kill Jeremy but aelita princess of lyoko kill's the darkness out of Jeremy because it was a virus of X.A.N.A and odd, yumi and urlich shut's off the super computer because the prince and princess want's to live in lyoko FOREVER oh and X.A.N.A was killed because the virus in Jeremy was X A.N.A

Cute...digital doggie...Would make an interesting sight. Good fic so far, keep em coming.

very good, please continue!

Hahaha! Great story you've got here - pretty much the most original I've seen yet. Keep it up ;)

UPDATE!

Really good!

I love it! You use incredibly iridescent words and astonishing description, as well as sticking to the point of the story and not getting too sidetracked! I can't wait for the next chapter!

It IS a trap, isn't it? I KNEW it! Watch a horde of hornets fly out of the sewer or something!