wow great story and i hope to read more of it. well ttyl

i just reread it and it's just as sweet & well-written & so like them in the dialogue & i started crying.

that could have been caused by my lack of sleep or the fact i have been staring the screen 4 a long time. (4 me. which is like 1/2 hour or so.)

anyhoo-signing off now-

-liz

Hm...wonderful. Raven was simply Raven. You've managed to reproduce Raven's almost exact personality, I aplaud you. I like how you are having everyone share thier feelings about the same events and keeping the cronology of the events in order. So BB/Rae? I like you. Oh and Raven thinking Star is prettier than her and feeling almost jealous, now that is what I've wanted someone to put in. Raven's thoughts about Starfire. Also the phrase unbridaled joy, was a nice touch. The mate of the soul conversation was done very well. And BB being serious I guess he would do that in his friends' time of need. I liked how you also put Raven's emotions into play and how they just exploded and exploded things. Simply wonderful.

*~ Can't wait to read more,

Aurora Starcrystal~*

I really liked this one. It was nice how you took conversations from past episodes and gently weaved them into your fic. Also tofu waffles? soy milk? that was funny especially when Cyborg gives BB a, "He likes my breakfast better" look. Oh I found it silly how Robin would argue over the placement of beads but I guess one does crazy things when they have lost thier love. I also liked how Robin commented on how Raven seemed as if she had no feelings definetly something I wanted to hear. I am sure there are a ton of other things I forgot to mention but oh well. Wonderful job overall.

*~ Can't wait to keep on reading,

Aurora Starcrystal~*

I do love the title, but what really drew me to your story is that you are building off of an actual episode. I always think that it is wonderful to see people being inspired by cartoons, it just goes to show that TV can be a good thing, sometimes. I liked how you portrayed Robin and how he would just lose it when star disappeared but he knew he had to stay strong. Robin is a bit dramatic but I guess losing Star would push him over the edge.

*~ Keep it up,

Aurora Starcrystal~*

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AWOSOME-NESS!LOVED IT,now tell me is Terra going to come into this story?

This is the sweetest story I have ever read. *sings to the theme of RFR* Lol. Anyway, I enjoyed your story, and would appreciate it if you UPDATE SOON! :D Keep it up!

I really like ur story so far.I guess that after u saw How long is 4ever? u wondered what happened on all those 10 years that passed right?Well I did oh and is it going 2 b all of the Titans point of view? Well all I gotta say is 1 more thing-Please update or write or whatever ASAP:PLEAZ-Thanks!

Hey Muffinface:

Srry; i misspelled self-esteem! :}

it wuz just the shock of the wonderfulness of ur piece that made my internal spellchecker shut down. i am still going 2 keel u. (tee-hee-hee!)

lizm spiffy

Muffunface!

Dude, the excellence of this piece is making my slef-esteem drop! You have such mad skills that i want to kill you! Argh!

Luke Skywalker would be proud.

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lizminski spiffy

:) Can i still use that idea for my story! It's gonna be way different i promise u!

OMG This was my idea for a story! we have alike minds! (Hugs!)

Kool story (Thumbs up)!

Excellent! Please post soon!

Great job! I really enjoyed how you got into how Robin felt... and used first

person. That's really new to me.