I love this, but now I want to know, WHAT IS EDNA"S OTHER WORK? The questions! I didn't get it.

i have a feeling that violet is going to get that 'special' dress

I noticed this hasn't been updated since 2004. Am I safe in assuming that this story will never be finished? That would be a shame.

Now you me wondering what Edna's other work is.

I like where this is going and I love Edna Mode. She would never waste her time if Violet was a normal high school student but for a superhero, Of course!

Good idea for a story. You really should have made the paragraphs longer. It seems pretty disjointed right now.

let me guess, this wonderful story will not be continued anytime at all in the future?

Cute.

This is an amusing concept and you've carried it off fairly well. Just two nitpicks:

1. I would put several sentances together to form full paragraphs instead of making a paragraph out of just one sentance.

2. We all know Edna has a thick German/Japanese accent. While I sometimes cave and spell her dialogue phoenetically, one can have too much of a good thing. Imply by description rather than attempt to visually convey how she sounds.

Otherwise, nice work. Good to see another Edna-ficcer out there. _

i love it ! ...plese finish it !

This is good, you seem to have Edna's character down :) Are you going to do more?

I don't get it. What's Edna's other work?

Impressive.

I don't mean it as an insult when I say that the direction of the plot seems fairly obvious. After all, the plot of Lord of the Rings is also fairly obvious. The important part is the delivery. Although your chapters are shorter than I like, they do hold up.

The touch of humor that you put in each chapter is what does it. Whether it's Violet thanking Dash with a kiss or Edna pushing the wrong button. In fact, at least in my opinion, the fourth chapter is the funniest because it shows where the story is headed and leaves us, the readers, to imagine how everyone will deal with it.

My only regret is that, after five months without an update, we may never find out how you would develop the story. You made a very good start.

Just in case, I've added the story to my story alert list.

Can't...Breathe...So...Funny...

Cute story. Update soon!