I'm enjoying the story so far, but it's hard to stay connected when the characters are so OOC... Still good though

What in God's name is happening in this fic! Such an interesting plotline but it got all jumbled up. Everything went on so abruptly. But seriously, I do love the idea behind it. I hope we get a rewrite from you somewhere in future :)

P.S. Sorry if I sounded rude. I'm kinda brash :/

Hermione/Fred. Christine/Harry

Christine : George
Hermione: Fred

Okay, this was a somewhat amusing story.
Although, I think you should read through it and have someone else read it. Are you aware of all of the errors and misspelled words?
Made me want to bang my head against my desk.

George & Christine should be together.

But give Harry someone really nice. His life tuned out To be a wreck.

this is a wonderful story love ready . . . . even with all of the miss spellings and grammatical errors . . . . 3

Ok just finished the story but... I'm still confused, what is it that ginny told her family that made hermione run?

love the story

Hermione will not end up with George, Harry or RON (UGH!)

I gave up on chapter two. You skipped around a lot and I found it hard to follow. I was actually cringing at some parts. The scene where Casey first meets Fred was completely confusing and gave me a headache. Not to mention the whiplash I got from how fast the character's moods changed. You really need to work on your grammar and spelling as well. Even the curiosity inside of me to see just what it was that made Hermione leave is not enough for me to continue reading your story.

This is an amazing story. I really, really enjoyed it. But what would benefit this story most would be if you edited it. There are lots of spelling errors, and improvements that could be made. I'm only telling you this because I absolutely love this story, and you would get many more readers if it was corrected. For example, rapped was used a lot, I'm assuming you meant raped also chacer, I'm assuming you mean chaser. But I love this story, I could tell you a thousand times over. If you need help editing it, I really don't mind, it would be a pleasure actually. But good job, it has a good balance of tragedy, and romance and has some humour too! It was a pleasure to read- I'll think I'll be reading it again sometime soon.

Watch your spelling and grammar

As interesting as this could be...the horrible spelling and grammar is quite distracting. Its more grammar, but it makes it hard to focus

love it