Awww, poor Dax. Mean Torn.

Another great story!

OH MY GOD! THAT WAS AWESOME! I've gotta hand it to ya...YOU ROCK GIRL!

aww poor Daxter! Hey you should have a "Chicken Little" story, but only it's "Ottsel Little" or something lol P

So, Torn got some revenge, good for him. Sometimes Dax needs to get taken down a peg. But this raised a question for me. Why on earth was Jak 'mute'?

TORN IS A MEANY AND DAXTER SHOULD DO THE NUT CRACKER AND MAKE TORN WEAR A SCOTISH KILT! WHAH HAAHAHAAHAAHAHAHAHAH!

-croons~ Poor Daxter... he needs revenge on Jak! xD

I loved the story(as you can see)... I can't wait for the next one!

!I will never ever more read this fairytale in any other version than this!you are a damn good narrator,torn!

That payback was too much for Daxter. I can't help but feel sorry for him. I hope he get's his revenge on Torn in the next story.

Cool Story. Can you write more?

Bwaha! Daxter lost his Seat of Power!

Oh man! So many funny lines! Torn's got the best ones. I like the quotes about Daxter's brain cell. Bwaha! And Sig! *is writing this as she reads along*

"My little me..." XD bwahaha!

Oh boy... I sense revenge from Daxter on Torn. Er. MORE revenge, that is. Hmm...what other fairy tales could you twist?

There's Little Red Riding Hood, Sleeping Beauty, The Three Lil Pigs...

aw. poor Dax. I hope him and Jak become friends again :(

ROFLMAO! This *Gasp* was *gasp* FUNNY!

Keep it up!

~Krazy Jimbo~

Good story, please continue...

Jak feels guilty. I know the feeling of being on a guilt trip, trust me it's not a nice experience. Anywho enough about me, the story was so funny and I'm finally glad to see that Torn got his revenge on Daxter but did ya have to make Jak feel bad. ANyway, Keep on writing these stories, they're brilliant!