wow.

If this story is eventually written I will be more than happy to read it! :)

Nice start this was recommended to me by a mate it will needs to be longer for me to really decide if I like it so please Keep up the good work! and write more please.

Please write more soon, I can see this fanfic could go somewhere really great. It definatly looks like you have some ideas up your sleve. Keep up the good work!

come on please write more please please please please please

so cool please write more i love your story so please write more.

love sexy foxy draco lover19

What is here is good but it needs to be longer for me to really decide if I like it.

windsib

This was recommended to me by a mate, and upon reading it he tells me there's more to come. I would like to read more as this definatly has a future, unlike some fanfics I've read in the past.

The style of writing is good, and one that I thouraly enjoy reading. This tiny little snippit holds everything key to a good story. Suspense, intruigue, description, and amazing metaphors (it's something I have a thing for). The way you descibed the rain was exquisit (and I'm sure that never gets said about rain) and the atmosphere builds up in such a way that keeps us reading all the way through.

Please write more soon, I can see this fanfic could go somewhere really great. It definatly looks like you have some ideas up your sleve. Keep up the good work!

Nice start. The chapter really needed to be longer.